Savannah Love
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65 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hey Barb,
Uh-oh, more bump-in-the-night happening while it's still light out!
Okay, gotta go to bed and get my beauty rest. Back attcha later.
Cheers * Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2014
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Hey Barb,
Uh-oh, more bump-in-the-night happening while it's still light out!
Okay, gotta go to bed and get my beauty rest. Back attcha later.
Cheers * Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax
Comment Written 17-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. You're too kind
Comment from Sankey
What next huh! This is getting eerier and eerier. You are a good story teller but I told you that before.
Good stuff. Keep up the good work. No Spags.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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What next huh! This is getting eerier and eerier. You are a good story teller but I told you that before.
Good stuff. Keep up the good work. No Spags.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from justmarly
Another great chapter. Loving it all the way. I just cxan not find a mistake. You are so smart. Were you a teacher or a University graduate? Very good work. MJ
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2013
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Another great chapter. Loving it all the way. I just cxan not find a mistake. You are so smart. Were you a teacher or a University graduate? Very good work. MJ
Comment Written 14-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. No, I only teach first graders.
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See you are smart. I am going this fall to college and upgrading in English. Thanks for your story. Soon to be going to read the next. MJ
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I keep saying I am going to take a creative writing class, but I never seem to find time.
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I know. There too much we have to do and it seems not enough time to do it all. But you are smart enough. Love to have your english education. MJ
Comment from NaughtieScribe
This was a cozy little intstallment with an eerie twist at the end. So who's in the house, or is it our little spooky friend/s. I didn't see any of the errors you mention in your footer. I though the dialogue read very believably. As I've come to expect, this is simply another great read. Onward.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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This was a cozy little intstallment with an eerie twist at the end. So who's in the house, or is it our little spooky friend/s. I didn't see any of the errors you mention in your footer. I though the dialogue read very believably. As I've come to expect, this is simply another great read. Onward.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I'm sorry you had to read this with no points attached.
Comment from Taffspride
Now the story gets back to the ghosts that seem to be an integral part of this story.
Cash always seems to dismiss them, but I wonder if he is right? Could it be that someone, or something does not want Paige here.
I really like the way you are leaving us wondering. I have a feeling that like all good authors, you are going to really surprise your readers.
Thank you for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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Now the story gets back to the ghosts that seem to be an integral part of this story.
Cash always seems to dismiss them, but I wonder if he is right? Could it be that someone, or something does not want Paige here.
I really like the way you are leaving us wondering. I have a feeling that like all good authors, you are going to really surprise your readers.
Thank you for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 13-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from TheEntilza
Not having read the previous chapters, I'm trying to be good and reserve judgment of the piece in general. That said, I found this a short, easy read. Nice hook at the end to get readers back for more.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Not having read the previous chapters, I'm trying to be good and reserve judgment of the piece in general. That said, I found this a short, easy read. Nice hook at the end to get readers back for more.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from santapola
Hello there a delightful write. I see it is part of a larger work which explains why there is not much of a plot here but I will back read some chapters to find out the story .
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Hello there a delightful write. I see it is part of a larger work which explains why there is not much of a plot here but I will back read some chapters to find out the story .
Comment Written 08-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mind of the Shephard
I like this it is written very well it is something taken out of life that I can relate to as well, it also seem a bit boring at first but I understand the setting, as I got to the end and they noticed the thump, it got my attention now I am wondering what made the thump since no one else is in the house and it is not the wind.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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I like this it is written very well it is something taken out of life that I can relate to as well, it also seem a bit boring at first but I understand the setting, as I got to the end and they noticed the thump, it got my attention now I am wondering what made the thump since no one else is in the house and it is not the wind.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mizzkris20
I think I've skipped through chapters but this is a pretty interesting chapter. The ghost seems as if its about ready to make its presence known. Can't wait for the next chapter
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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I think I've skipped through chapters but this is a pretty interesting chapter. The ghost seems as if its about ready to make its presence known. Can't wait for the next chapter
Comment Written 08-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Yes, I'm back :) - my computer is fixed! I have to tell you, when I read your author's notes, it makes me very hesitant to post more of my book as I am planning! I just posted the prologue and chapter 1 because I thought for character development (which isn't part of the overview/synopsis, I'd better post a few of the older chapters first.) Barbara, it sounds like you've been getting a hard time and I just don't understand it! These chapters are great! What is wrong with these people? I love how you've written this one again, and I love where you ended - big-time suspense to lead into the next part or chapter!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Yes, I'm back :) - my computer is fixed! I have to tell you, when I read your author's notes, it makes me very hesitant to post more of my book as I am planning! I just posted the prologue and chapter 1 because I thought for character development (which isn't part of the overview/synopsis, I'd better post a few of the older chapters first.) Barbara, it sounds like you've been getting a hard time and I just don't understand it! These chapters are great! What is wrong with these people? I love how you've written this one again, and I love where you ended - big-time suspense to lead into the next part or chapter!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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My great pleasure!
