Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Chapter 5.part 3"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi Barb,
Fun chapter with the gals. The lined dancing I never mastered, but my son taught me to two-step, pretty cool. He used to teach line dancing at one of his naval bases. Nope, he didn't get his musical talent from me. I'm known a Horrible Hannah of the dance floor! Hey, gotta have some claim to fame!
Great chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2014
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Hi Barb,
Fun chapter with the gals. The lined dancing I never mastered, but my son taught me to two-step, pretty cool. He used to teach line dancing at one of his naval bases. Nope, he didn't get his musical talent from me. I'm known a Horrible Hannah of the dance floor! Hey, gotta have some claim to fame!
Great chapter.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax
Comment Written 17-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. LOL
Comment from Sankey
Wow. Good work. Still interesting. Wondering about Walker huh! Is he prejudiced against black folks? Or just a professional creep. I still reckon Alabama for starters is still pretty racist for the 21sy Century. Hope I am wrong.
No Spags again.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Wow. Good work. Still interesting. Wondering about Walker huh! Is he prejudiced against black folks? Or just a professional creep. I still reckon Alabama for starters is still pretty racist for the 21sy Century. Hope I am wrong.
No Spags again.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from justmarly
YOU Never Cease to amaze me. Wow You have such a good story. This fits so well. I love watching a man dance and I danced with one before and it felt so great. LOL You have a great story. I don't know how to add music when I put my story up. Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm trying to do so much. Keeping up with Fanstory, reading guidelines in smashwords, and packing to move to my own apt. Wow.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2013
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YOU Never Cease to amaze me. Wow You have such a good story. This fits so well. I love watching a man dance and I danced with one before and it felt so great. LOL You have a great story. I don't know how to add music when I put my story up. Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm trying to do so much. Keeping up with Fanstory, reading guidelines in smashwords, and packing to move to my own apt. Wow.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2013
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Thank you for taking the time to go back and read.
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Yes, I will go back again Have a nice day. MJ
Comment from Taffspride
I know I sound like a broken record, but you have another well written chapter here Barbara.
The dialog between the girls is particularly well done, (and mostly without tags, I really like that) I could almost feel I was part of this all girl party. You described their feelings so well.
I am left wondering how Dwane Walker will feature in future chapters. What are his motives? we shall see I am sure.
Thank you, I am glad the next chapters are available to me now.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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I know I sound like a broken record, but you have another well written chapter here Barbara.
The dialog between the girls is particularly well done, (and mostly without tags, I really like that) I could almost feel I was part of this all girl party. You described their feelings so well.
I am left wondering how Dwane Walker will feature in future chapters. What are his motives? we shall see I am sure.
Thank you, I am glad the next chapters are available to me now.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 13-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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I am so sorry you have to read this without getting the bonus points. Thank you, I appreciate it.
Comment from Readywriter52
The women are having a great party. They like to gossip and have manicures. Their favorite topic seems to be Cash. Paige doesn't seem to like Dwayne's attention. Nala doesn't seem to like him either.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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The women are having a great party. They like to gossip and have manicures. Their favorite topic seems to be Cash. Paige doesn't seem to like Dwayne's attention. Nala doesn't seem to like him either.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RaymondJohn
Good "Girl talk." I'm intrigued by the idea of changing the locks as it fits in the story. Once again I recommend varying sentence length to avoid sounding choppy, but this is a matter of preference. Best. ray.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2012
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Good "Girl talk." I'm intrigued by the idea of changing the locks as it fits in the story. Once again I recommend varying sentence length to avoid sounding choppy, but this is a matter of preference. Best. ray.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from essence56
I am really waiting to see the outcome of this story, it is so awesome. I love how you describe each characters place in this story. And the characters become so real. I am wishing the best for Paige and I wonder who the real one in her life will be. See ya later.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2012
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I am really waiting to see the outcome of this story, it is so awesome. I love how you describe each characters place in this story. And the characters become so real. I am wishing the best for Paige and I wonder who the real one in her life will be. See ya later.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
It is funny how a simple chapter about three female friends doing girl type things can be interesting to a man, but I was entertained by this chapter. I became appropriately chilled at the seeming intrusion of the character Dr. Walker. He seems to be a dark character who will cause problems later on. I look forward to the chapter of this interesting story.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2012
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It is funny how a simple chapter about three female friends doing girl type things can be interesting to a man, but I was entertained by this chapter. I became appropriately chilled at the seeming intrusion of the character Dr. Walker. He seems to be a dark character who will cause problems later on. I look forward to the chapter of this interesting story.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Your hard work has paid off my friend. This is a brilliant post for this story. I loved it, and hated the fact that it stopped. I wanted to keep reading.
Exceptional ability to capture me even as I've been off site for a bit this pulled me right in.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
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Your hard work has paid off my friend. This is a brilliant post for this story. I loved it, and hated the fact that it stopped. I wanted to keep reading.
Exceptional ability to capture me even as I've been off site for a bit this pulled me right in.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 31-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Connie P
Great chapter. It seems the ones that give us trouble usually turn out best. You're doing a good job with the Southern culture and language. No, I don't think Cash will go for having his nails done.
Connie
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
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Great chapter. It seems the ones that give us trouble usually turn out best. You're doing a good job with the Southern culture and language. No, I don't think Cash will go for having his nails done.
Connie
Comment Written 31-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
