Savannah Love
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Comment from fictionwriter
wow, masages sounds wonderful. I'd like to hone in those girls day. I can't imagine why Cash wouldn't want to hang out. Ha, ha. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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wow, masages sounds wonderful. I'd like to hone in those girls day. I can't imagine why Cash wouldn't want to hang out. Ha, ha. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. Cash isn't into female things. LOL
Comment from MumEsGirl
Good going Barbara. I can see that Paige is certainly jumpy after all here experiences.
Nice light chapter to compensate for the few spooky ones that I read. Apologies for missing a few posts, have been pretty busy over the last few weeks
hugs
kate
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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Good going Barbara. I can see that Paige is certainly jumpy after all here experiences.
Nice light chapter to compensate for the few spooky ones that I read. Apologies for missing a few posts, have been pretty busy over the last few weeks
hugs
kate
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind reiview.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Another excellent chapter and I'm eager to read more. I really want to find out about the ghost. I'm a little behind on my reading but I'm happy I'm getting this story caught up. Great job.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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Another excellent chapter and I'm eager to read more. I really want to find out about the ghost. I'm a little behind on my reading but I'm happy I'm getting this story caught up. Great job.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rtobaygo
WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE QUALITY OF WRITING I HAVEN'T SAID ALREADY. ONE FACT PIQUE MY INTEREST, IS THE UNUSUAL INTEREST OR MORE EXACT OF CASH'S IMPLIED DISTRUST OF MAURICE'S OCCUPATION. ARE YOU SETTING THE SCENE WHERE THE DISTRUST BECOME OUTWARD JEALOUSLY OF CASH FOR THE PROTAGONIST? DOES MAURICE BECOME ONE OF YOUR MINOR PROTAGONISTS?
TAKE CARE,
RAY
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THE QUALITY OF WRITING I HAVEN'T SAID ALREADY. ONE FACT PIQUE MY INTEREST, IS THE UNUSUAL INTEREST OR MORE EXACT OF CASH'S IMPLIED DISTRUST OF MAURICE'S OCCUPATION. ARE YOU SETTING THE SCENE WHERE THE DISTRUST BECOME OUTWARD JEALOUSLY OF CASH FOR THE PROTAGONIST? DOES MAURICE BECOME ONE OF YOUR MINOR PROTAGONISTS?
TAKE CARE,
RAY
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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MAURICE WILL HAVE AN INTERESTING PART IN MY POST. I THINK POOR CASH WILL HAVE A FEW MORE ISSUES WITH HIM. THANK YOU FOR THE KIND REVEIW.
Comment from RaymondJohn
Very good in all respects. Quick movement and good characterization. I'm not a fan of romance, but this is just right. Ray.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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Very good in all respects. Quick movement and good characterization. I'm not a fan of romance, but this is just right. Ray.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dthomas6985
Hello, how are you? Very nice continuation. I'm loving your story about paige and cash, It's getting better by the minute. And I hope they all had a nice time pampering that day.(smiles) Thanks for sharing and it's always a blessing. Much blessings.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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Hello, how are you? Very nice continuation. I'm loving your story about paige and cash, It's getting better by the minute. And I hope they all had a nice time pampering that day.(smiles) Thanks for sharing and it's always a blessing. Much blessings.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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Thank your for the kind reveiw.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
LMAO! Cash isn't even trying to hide the fact that he's a bit jealous. I love it. This scene so reminds me of a simular conversation I had with my recently ex-bf. I swear if another man tells me he can do something for free that I pay an expert for I'll plotz. This novel just keeps getting better. Where's the rest of it, Missy?
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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LMAO! Cash isn't even trying to hide the fact that he's a bit jealous. I love it. This scene so reminds me of a simular conversation I had with my recently ex-bf. I swear if another man tells me he can do something for free that I pay an expert for I'll plotz. This novel just keeps getting better. Where's the rest of it, Missy?
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and the insight. I raised four boys, and a husband. LOL. Anyway, I try to use real life stories in my post. I just boost them slightly.
Comment from Writingfundimension
Very playful chapter, barbara. I like the rise you got out of Cash in response to the masseuse. I imagine that most men feel that way about male massage therapists. Now, we'll see if the doors continue to open on their own. Even Cash would be unable to explain that away. Warm regards, Bev
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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Very playful chapter, barbara. I like the rise you got out of Cash in response to the masseuse. I imagine that most men feel that way about male massage therapists. Now, we'll see if the doors continue to open on their own. Even Cash would be unable to explain that away. Warm regards, Bev
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
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You're most welcome, barbara.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
I don't know, but looks like there is a big tension situation between Paige and Cash. As always, this is very well written, with excellent flow, and interaction.
GREAT JOB Barbara!
:)
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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I don't know, but looks like there is a big tension situation between Paige and Cash. As always, this is very well written, with excellent flow, and interaction.
GREAT JOB Barbara!
:)
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi barbara,
Cash is certainly getting a bit more than 'protective' here, I'd say he's staking out 'his' territory as well.
Now I wonder whether his changing the locks is going to keep the 'ghost' out. Somehow I think perhaps not ...
Patrick
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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Hi barbara,
Cash is certainly getting a bit more than 'protective' here, I'd say he's staking out 'his' territory as well.
Now I wonder whether his changing the locks is going to keep the 'ghost' out. Somehow I think perhaps not ...
Patrick
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I would think locks are not a problem to ghosts.
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But that depends on how 'real' they are ...
Patrick
