Savannah Love
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hey Barb,
Fire engine read reminds me of the time my sister-in-law painted my brothers toes bright red when he fell asleep on the couch. When he woke up she mentioned him sleeping, but he quickly assured her that, like when we were kids, he was 'just resting his eyes'!! LOL.. Then he he saw his red toes.
I hope the girls little get-together goes without incident.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2014
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Hey Barb,
Fire engine read reminds me of the time my sister-in-law painted my brothers toes bright red when he fell asleep on the couch. When he woke up she mentioned him sleeping, but he quickly assured her that, like when we were kids, he was 'just resting his eyes'!! LOL.. Then he he saw his red toes.
I hope the girls little get-together goes without incident.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax
Comment Written 13-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. LOL
Comment from Sankey
lovely work. Still interesting. Hope Maurice doesn't turn out to be some kind of pervert. Really enjoying your story. When is Cash and Paige gonna get it together? NO SPAGS.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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lovely work. Still interesting. Hope Maurice doesn't turn out to be some kind of pervert. Really enjoying your story. When is Cash and Paige gonna get it together? NO SPAGS.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Taffspride
I have been on vacation and missed these posts through sporadic internet connections. Now it is time to catch up.
Here is another well written chapter. I chuckled at the thought of Cash's nails being painted "fire engine red" and at his apparent distrust of Maurice.
Must read the rest. Great read.
Iechyd da,
Ann
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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I have been on vacation and missed these posts through sporadic internet connections. Now it is time to catch up.
Here is another well written chapter. I chuckled at the thought of Cash's nails being painted "fire engine red" and at his apparent distrust of Maurice.
Must read the rest. Great read.
Iechyd da,
Ann
Comment Written 13-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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You are wonderful. Thank you.
Comment from Norbanus
Excekkebt dialogue. I like your practice of using action tags instead of speech tags. A few of them could be left out, too.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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Excekkebt dialogue. I like your practice of using action tags instead of speech tags. A few of them could be left out, too.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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I have taken some hits from people saying they didn't know who was talking. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from EMB
Wow. Can Maurice sound any more gay. And what's with this ploy to try and make Cash jealous. Or is she? Well, if Cash is close to being a real man, he shouldn't even take the bait, especially with a "Maurice" the massage therapist. LOL
This was engaging, Barbara.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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Wow. Can Maurice sound any more gay. And what's with this ploy to try and make Cash jealous. Or is she? Well, if Cash is close to being a real man, he shouldn't even take the bait, especially with a "Maurice" the massage therapist. LOL
This was engaging, Barbara.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mtrybak
Ok, got the first part of the story of ladies night in. Now I can see what they were talking about in regards to cash. I read chapter 5.part3. Now I need to find the next page. I'm still learning my way around the site but I'll figure it out! Outstanding writing. I'm so glad your going to have this published.
Michele
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Ok, got the first part of the story of ladies night in. Now I can see what they were talking about in regards to cash. I read chapter 5.part3. Now I need to find the next page. I'm still learning my way around the site but I'll figure it out! Outstanding writing. I'm so glad your going to have this published.
Michele
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Thank you for following up,
Comment from Janie King
Paint his nails fire engine read...that would be the day...I've only had one massage and I'm not comfortable with it...but I know people that think they've died and gone to heaven when they get one...Good thing God made us all different and it's okay to be different. Good chapter. God bless.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Paint his nails fire engine read...that would be the day...I've only had one massage and I'm not comfortable with it...but I know people that think they've died and gone to heaven when they get one...Good thing God made us all different and it's okay to be different. Good chapter. God bless.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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I have never had a massage, but it sounds like fun. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mcline04
In the first part of the story, it is really early in the morning. Cash then says he will see her in the morning. Maybe that should be changed to tomorrow morning. Even though I haven't read any other part, it's interesting enough for me to see what happens with Maurice.
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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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In the first part of the story, it is really early in the morning. Cash then says he will see her in the morning. Maybe that should be changed to tomorrow morning. Even though I haven't read any other part, it's interesting enough for me to see what happens with Maurice.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Thank you
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Sounds like a fun girl's day, but I suspect something a bit more frightening will happen. Well written and interesting with good character development!!!Debbie
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2012
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Sounds like a fun girl's day, but I suspect something a bit more frightening will happen. Well written and interesting with good character development!!!Debbie
Comment Written 25-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from smudge
Excellent flowing prose. The dialogue moves the story on. The description of the body language is adds flavor. Well presented with the puss.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2012
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Excellent flowing prose. The dialogue moves the story on. The description of the body language is adds flavor. Well presented with the puss.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
