Savannah Love
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Comment from rheabug
Good job with this chapter, Barbara. I do enjoy your story line. It is sure different than your last book that I read. This is a story to get lost in on a cool winter's night.
Blessings, Linda
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Good job with this chapter, Barbara. I do enjoy your story line. It is sure different than your last book that I read. This is a story to get lost in on a cool winter's night.
Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 15-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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My little muse just jumps all over the place. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Chris Tee
Yes I see the relevance and see how important that was. This is another absolutely marvelous write here and indeed a pleasure to have read and review. Well done Barbara.
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Yes I see the relevance and see how important that was. This is another absolutely marvelous write here and indeed a pleasure to have read and review. Well done Barbara.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Great work in this, Barbara. I always look forward to reading your chapters. They make me think of some of Nora Roberts' novels. Excellent characterizations. We see Paige being frightened, thinking she has seen something. When Cash tries to reassure her, she puts on a brave front. Keeping a journal to document her experiences is a great idea--if the ghost doesn't hide it. Cash tries to reassure her, but he also senses that something's wrong but it isn't a ghost. He's trying to keep Paige from worrying too much. Very absorbing. judi
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Great work in this, Barbara. I always look forward to reading your chapters. They make me think of some of Nora Roberts' novels. Excellent characterizations. We see Paige being frightened, thinking she has seen something. When Cash tries to reassure her, she puts on a brave front. Keeping a journal to document her experiences is a great idea--if the ghost doesn't hide it. Cash tries to reassure her, but he also senses that something's wrong but it isn't a ghost. He's trying to keep Paige from worrying too much. Very absorbing. judi
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words. I'm smiling.
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You're so welcome, Barbara. judi
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
This story gets more intriguing with each chapter. I too believe there is something wrong in the house and even Cash saw what Paige saw but didn't want to scare her so kept it to himself. I wonder what or who he will find when he checks the house again? This is a real page turner and I can't wait to see what happens next.....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Hi Barbara,
This story gets more intriguing with each chapter. I too believe there is something wrong in the house and even Cash saw what Paige saw but didn't want to scare her so kept it to himself. I wonder what or who he will find when he checks the house again? This is a real page turner and I can't wait to see what happens next.....blessings, chey
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mishelly
The creepiness is continuing nicely. I really like Cash's protective nature with Paige. The changes you made to the end of the previous post work so much better. It feels more natural now. Once again, I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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The creepiness is continuing nicely. I really like Cash's protective nature with Paige. The changes you made to the end of the previous post work so much better. It feels more natural now. Once again, I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Deorre Leonard
This is a good read. The characters are great. It held my interest from beginning to end. It has a good flow. I need to go back and read the previous chapters to this. Nicely said. Deorre
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This is a good read. The characters are great. It held my interest from beginning to end. It has a good flow. I need to go back and read the previous chapters to this. Nicely said. Deorre
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from L.lora
So intrigueing, can't wait
for more. Excellently thought
out and presented with strong
narratives and good realistic
dialogue. Smooth and easy to
read, most enjoyable. Builds
well--holds the reader's interest.
no nits or spags. Lora
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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So intrigueing, can't wait
for more. Excellently thought
out and presented with strong
narratives and good realistic
dialogue. Smooth and easy to
read, most enjoyable. Builds
well--holds the reader's interest.
no nits or spags. Lora
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Stalking Wolf
Very well written chapter, Cash thinking there is more to this situation than ghosts. The reader wonders, is it lost pirate gold, Confederate gold, drug smuggling? Great reading, so many questions.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Very well written chapter, Cash thinking there is more to this situation than ghosts. The reader wonders, is it lost pirate gold, Confederate gold, drug smuggling? Great reading, so many questions.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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You have a great imagination. I enjoyed reading your review, thank you
Comment from Janie King
You're leaving me hang here for a whole week? Oh darling how could you do that? Ha ha! Good chapter...now I wait...hummmmmmm. God bless.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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You're leaving me hang here for a whole week? Oh darling how could you do that? Ha ha! Good chapter...now I wait...hummmmmmm. God bless.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the humorous review.
Comment from Writingfundimension
Cash sure is a sensitive and caring soul. No doubt, he will be Paige's best ally in the days ahead. A very enjoyable chapter, barbara.
Warm regards, Bev
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Cash sure is a sensitive and caring soul. No doubt, he will be Paige's best ally in the days ahead. A very enjoyable chapter, barbara.
Warm regards, Bev
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
