Savannah Love
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Holy-Moly, she passed up a golden opportunity with Cash. Is the woman daft? LOL.
Okay, so she'll scream while he's checking out the place one last time. I rest my case!
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2014
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Holy-Moly, she passed up a golden opportunity with Cash. Is the woman daft? LOL.
Okay, so she'll scream while he's checking out the place one last time. I rest my case!
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax
Comment Written 13-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. Too Funny
Comment from Sankey
Hmmm chapters getting shorter. Are you back at work now?
All good stuff. Still exciting and ghostly. Keeps me going and interesting for sure. Wondering who the imposter is.
No Spags.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Hmmm chapters getting shorter. Are you back at work now?
All good stuff. Still exciting and ghostly. Keeps me going and interesting for sure. Wondering who the imposter is.
No Spags.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. yes, I am back to work.
Comment from fictionwriter
What a great guy to be so worried about the newcomer in town. I don't know if very many men would even think twice about a girl being afraid of a ghost or poo-pooing her as whinny. Great job.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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What a great guy to be so worried about the newcomer in town. I don't know if very many men would even think twice about a girl being afraid of a ghost or poo-pooing her as whinny. Great job.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rtobaygo
I DON'T KNOW WHY YOU WORK WAS NOT POSTED TO MY MESSAGE BOARD. THE EXPLANATION I RECEIVED FROM FANSTORY MADE IT EVEN MORE CONFUSING. YOUR WORK AND THOSE OF OTHER AUTHORS I FOLLOW FORCE ME TO GO TO YOUR PROFILE AND PULL UP YOUR MOST RECENT WORKS.
GOOD WORD FLOW BETWEEN RITUALISTIC CHARACTERS WITH SUFFICIENT BEATS SO THE READER DIDN'T BECOME BOGGED DOWN WITH ONLY DIALOGUE. GOOD HOOKS TO SETUP THE NEXT SCENE AND TO PIQUE THE READER'S INTEREST.
TAKE CARE, RAY
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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I DON'T KNOW WHY YOU WORK WAS NOT POSTED TO MY MESSAGE BOARD. THE EXPLANATION I RECEIVED FROM FANSTORY MADE IT EVEN MORE CONFUSING. YOUR WORK AND THOSE OF OTHER AUTHORS I FOLLOW FORCE ME TO GO TO YOUR PROFILE AND PULL UP YOUR MOST RECENT WORKS.
GOOD WORD FLOW BETWEEN RITUALISTIC CHARACTERS WITH SUFFICIENT BEATS SO THE READER DIDN'T BECOME BOGGED DOWN WITH ONLY DIALOGUE. GOOD HOOKS TO SETUP THE NEXT SCENE AND TO PIQUE THE READER'S INTEREST.
TAKE CARE, RAY
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2012
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THANK YOU FOR SEARCHING ME OUT. I AM SORRY YOU HAD TO DO THAT. YOU CAN COUNT ON MY POSTING EVERY SUNDAY, UNLESS SOMETHING MAJOR HAPPENS. I APPRECIATE YOUR REVIEW.
Comment from mr elis
The reader has a feeling this story obligates one to read it,through and after following it close it leaves one with a very deep interest in how it's going to end.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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The reader has a feeling this story obligates one to read it,through and after following it close it leaves one with a very deep interest in how it's going to end.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from TammyGail
Excellent work crafting another excellent read barbara - indeed well written and expressed like always you kept me from start to closing - thanks for the notes and the read always a pleasure -
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Excellent work crafting another excellent read barbara - indeed well written and expressed like always you kept me from start to closing - thanks for the notes and the read always a pleasure -
Comment Written 18-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rama devi
Good build up of tension and closing hook - I suspect he'll find something, right?
Fine flow, pacing, dialog and narrative.
Short chapter, but I suspect you post them short on purpose for fanstory, right?
This is cute--made me smile-
"Mr. or Mrs. Ghost, I'm sorry I screamed. I didn't mean to hurt your feelings."
I did not notice any issues or spag.
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Good build up of tension and closing hook - I suspect he'll find something, right?
Fine flow, pacing, dialog and narrative.
Short chapter, but I suspect you post them short on purpose for fanstory, right?
This is cute--made me smile-
"Mr. or Mrs. Ghost, I'm sorry I screamed. I didn't mean to hurt your feelings."
I did not notice any issues or spag.
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 18-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thank y ou for the kind review. I am SHOCKED you didn't find anything. Commas aren't my strong area.
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Yes, I usually spot a few things...though sometimes I miss if only reading once through. In some cases, commas are optional.
Comment from RaymondJohn
Good chapter, though it is too short to know where you are going with the story. Your use of dialogue is very good. I still would like to see a bit more flesh to the story. Ray,
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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Good chapter, though it is too short to know where you are going with the story. Your use of dialogue is very good. I still would like to see a bit more flesh to the story. Ray,
Comment Written 17-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
I love the cleaver and intelligent dialogues between Paige and Cash, making fun of Mr. or Mrs. Ghost, and talking about the cultural differences between North and South.
This is a VERY enjoyable chapter Barbara!
Take care dear friend!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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I love the cleaver and intelligent dialogues between Paige and Cash, making fun of Mr. or Mrs. Ghost, and talking about the cultural differences between North and South.
This is a VERY enjoyable chapter Barbara!
Take care dear friend!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Allezw2
Lady Barbara wilkey,
An interesting chapter to drop in on. Writing a journal to document a fright is an interesting way to alleviate a case of the shakes.
With Sir Galahad afoot, what could be more secure.
Nicely done,
Fantasist
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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Lady Barbara wilkey,
An interesting chapter to drop in on. Writing a journal to document a fright is an interesting way to alleviate a case of the shakes.
With Sir Galahad afoot, what could be more secure.
Nicely done,
Fantasist
Comment Written 17-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome.
