Comment from missy98writer

Excellent

Barbara,
Chapter four part three is teriffic and splendidly written.
Cash is still shicked by seeing the two ghost.
Paige is facinsted by the tour guide's reaccount of the history of Savanna and its ghost.
Your dialogue is excellent.
Your detailed writing is great.
I look forward to reading more of your thrilling ghost story.
I'd recommend chapter four part three to other readers as a "must" read.
Keep up the mighty fine writing, my friend.
How do you like your kids this year, teacher?
Love ya,
Melissa.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.
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 Comment Written 16-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

reply by c_lucas on 16-Sep-2012

You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

very interesting conversation about Sherman from two polar opposite points of view
Interesting information about the underground railroad tunnels in Savanna
I enjoy the ghost tour :-) Brooke

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 Comment Written 16-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2012

Thank you for the kind review.