Savannah Love
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Comment from unimatrix001
Paige's ignorance is a bit annoying in this chapter. In previous chapters she seems genuinely intellegent, but unfamiliar with southern custom. That unfamiliarity does not explain her actions here.
She is from the city of Boston. Why would she think it okay to go someplace unfamiliar alone at night? Why wasn't she more upset about the hoodlums harrassing her?
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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Paige's ignorance is a bit annoying in this chapter. In previous chapters she seems genuinely intellegent, but unfamiliar with southern custom. That unfamiliarity does not explain her actions here.
She is from the city of Boston. Why would she think it okay to go someplace unfamiliar alone at night? Why wasn't she more upset about the hoodlums harrassing her?
Comment Written 27-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mishelly
The suspense is building up very nicely in this story. Meanwhile, you have two thoroughly enjoyable characters with Cash and Paige. I like their continued flirtation and I can't wait to see where this story is going, and where these two characters are headed.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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The suspense is building up very nicely in this story. Meanwhile, you have two thoroughly enjoyable characters with Cash and Paige. I like their continued flirtation and I can't wait to see where this story is going, and where these two characters are headed.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from vfbryant
I've read at least one other chapter of this story and enjoyed it. This is just as enjoyable. I like the fact that Cash doesn't realize he may be developing feelings for Paige, and I like his chivalrous attitude toward her. Of course, the whole question of the light adds an attractive intrigue as well. I look forward to the next..
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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I've read at least one other chapter of this story and enjoyed it. This is just as enjoyable. I like the fact that Cash doesn't realize he may be developing feelings for Paige, and I like his chivalrous attitude toward her. Of course, the whole question of the light adds an attractive intrigue as well. I look forward to the next..
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Stalking Wolf
A very interesting chapter. Loved the fact, she wouldn't listen and got slammed, so very female. LOL, Lights off, lights on, makes for good question, why, or what. Enjoying.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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A very interesting chapter. Loved the fact, she wouldn't listen and got slammed, so very female. LOL, Lights off, lights on, makes for good question, why, or what. Enjoying.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from fictionwriter
Interesting stuff. I'm sure the ghost will eventually let itself be seen. I'm really anxious to see how it will appear. Loved this chapter.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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Interesting stuff. I'm sure the ghost will eventually let itself be seen. I'm really anxious to see how it will appear. Loved this chapter.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jen Gentry
I love Cash's protective streak and Paige's independent one. The conflict of their relationship is making for a strong one. Your dialogue as usual makes your characters personalities come out well. Another great chapter.
Jenny
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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I love Cash's protective streak and Paige's independent one. The conflict of their relationship is making for a strong one. Your dialogue as usual makes your characters personalities come out well. Another great chapter.
Jenny
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dawn Munro
The plot thickens! You're killing me! I see Paige and Cash are getting closer, though he's a bit thick-headed, lumping the way he looks at her with the way he looks at everyone else -LOL (typical male). Not to rush you, but ghosts, I want ghosts! (Just kidding - your pacing is excellent! I'm on tenterhooks!)
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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The plot thickens! You're killing me! I see Paige and Cash are getting closer, though he's a bit thick-headed, lumping the way he looks at her with the way he looks at everyone else -LOL (typical male). Not to rush you, but ghosts, I want ghosts! (Just kidding - your pacing is excellent! I'm on tenterhooks!)
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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Your review made me laugh. If I produce the ghost the story would be over. LOL Thank you for the encouragement.
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I know, I know, but it's done to me with my book, so turn-about is fair play! (LOL) Listen, I had no idea that we are limited in the number of private messages we can send on this site -apparently I have used mine again today (yesterday too!) I just wanted to say that I am glad you feel that way, because I do too!
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i didn't know it either. HUMMMM, wierd.
Comment from juliedickson55
Nice. I read a previous chapter of this story before and enjoyed it a lot.
Your characters are fun and well-rounded.
Yes, your love for Savannah comes through.
thanks for sharing this.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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Nice. I read a previous chapter of this story before and enjoyed it a lot.
Your characters are fun and well-rounded.
Yes, your love for Savannah comes through.
thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from elgone
So Cash is a football hero and the ghost is trying to get Paige's attention. This is a good story. You are presenting it well and it holds the reader's interest throughout.
Suggestion:
of the room she'd used to paint in - of the room she'd used for painting
"Come on[ ],( )Billy Joe, there
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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So Cash is a football hero and the ghost is trying to get Paige's attention. This is a good story. You are presenting it well and it holds the reader's interest throughout.
Suggestion:
of the room she'd used to paint in - of the room she'd used for painting
"Come on[ ],( )Billy Joe, there
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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Thanks for the catches. I appreciat your eagle eye.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Another strange happening. Your writing sucks me right into the story and keeps me there. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. Great job.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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Another strange happening. Your writing sucks me right into the story and keeps me there. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. Great job.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
