Savannah Love
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi Barb,
I thought Paige would sneak a quick kiss, just to fluster Cash. She does seem to have that effect on him. Like the fast but easy flow of this chapter. Nala adds some interest/dimension too.
Great read.
Cheers * Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Hi Barb,
I thought Paige would sneak a quick kiss, just to fluster Cash. She does seem to have that effect on him. Like the fast but easy flow of this chapter. Nala adds some interest/dimension too.
Great read.
Cheers * Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Paige is a stinker. Thank you
Comment from Sankey
Once again having a eerily cool time in here. I hope we can all keep up with each other. Just as well I had to skp back to the beginning. No Spags as good as usual thanks for a great read.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Once again having a eerily cool time in here. I hope we can all keep up with each other. Just as well I had to skp back to the beginning. No Spags as good as usual thanks for a great read.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from justmarly
Wow! This is so good. I love this story. I read all of someone's stories. There were many chapters it was about a Haunted Hill. That was good. Young characters seem so real. I would love to live in her house. I feel I am there as well. Thanks for sharing your work. MJ
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2013
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Wow! This is so good. I love this story. I read all of someone's stories. There were many chapters it was about a Haunted Hill. That was good. Young characters seem so real. I would love to live in her house. I feel I am there as well. Thanks for sharing your work. MJ
Comment Written 12-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
The fist shaking gesture from Paige seems a bit off. I associate that display with an older male, not a young woman. Same with the use of the word hoodlum. This confuses Paiges age for me.
Okay the ghost is getting prime treatment. I like. And clearly Cash (so love the name) has a bit if a history himself. I need more info. Must keep reading.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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The fist shaking gesture from Paige seems a bit off. I associate that display with an older male, not a young woman. Same with the use of the word hoodlum. This confuses Paiges age for me.
Okay the ghost is getting prime treatment. I like. And clearly Cash (so love the name) has a bit if a history himself. I need more info. Must keep reading.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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Cash, is keeping his history to himself right now. It will come out in perfect timinging, I hope. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mtnspirit
Hi Barbara,
Seems as if others are starting to notice Cash is occupied with Paige and Paige is becoming acutely aware of Cash as well. I hope her ghost isn't a harmful one.
Good story and you have done great job in writing the piece. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2012
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Hi Barbara,
Seems as if others are starting to notice Cash is occupied with Paige and Paige is becoming acutely aware of Cash as well. I hope her ghost isn't a harmful one.
Good story and you have done great job in writing the piece. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2012
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I am sorry you have to read this after I had it promoted.
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hey there Barbara
This chapter is very intriguing, and I am enjoying it as the relationbship between Paige and Cash continues to build. It will be cool to see where it ends up
Bear
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2012
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Hey there Barbara
This chapter is very intriguing, and I am enjoying it as the relationbship between Paige and Cash continues to build. It will be cool to see where it ends up
Bear
Comment Written 30-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from writesinsonnets
I enjoyed this story, it is a cute write........I really have no suggestions, you have stated the dialogue had errors on purpose and that is what I would have suggested to correct. Good luck on your writing future.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2012
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I enjoyed this story, it is a cute write........I really have no suggestions, you have stated the dialogue had errors on purpose and that is what I would have suggested to correct. Good luck on your writing future.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from tallahasseesmiles
Terrific story and the story line was very interesting. It flowed really well, but I guess you alredy know there is nothing you can do to really change it and make it better other than continue on with the story...............
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2012
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Terrific story and the story line was very interesting. It flowed really well, but I guess you alredy know there is nothing you can do to really change it and make it better other than continue on with the story...............
Comment Written 29-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Very well written chapter. I wonder if she's got herself a haunted house here... hmmm. Or something MORE sinister is going on. Someone might have been there and left without Nala noticing. Will have to keep reading. :)
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2012
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Very well written chapter. I wonder if she's got herself a haunted house here... hmmm. Or something MORE sinister is going on. Someone might have been there and left without Nala noticing. Will have to keep reading. :)
Comment Written 29-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Readywriter52
Strange things are happening in Paige's home. Maybe she does have ghosts. She should have taken Cash with her when she decided to take pictures. It's a shame there are places you need armed protection.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2012
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Strange things are happening in Paige's home. Maybe she does have ghosts. She should have taken Cash with her when she decided to take pictures. It's a shame there are places you need armed protection.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
