Savannah Love
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Comment from jjstar
I love the picture. It fits perfectly with the setting and dialogue you've created. I think I might have missed a chapter, so I'll have to go back and read. I love the sense of tension I got when Paige and Cash run into Dwayne Baker. I felt the accusatory glances and assumptions that it seemed Dwayne was making about P and C. Good job!
JJ
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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I love the picture. It fits perfectly with the setting and dialogue you've created. I think I might have missed a chapter, so I'll have to go back and read. I love the sense of tension I got when Paige and Cash run into Dwayne Baker. I felt the accusatory glances and assumptions that it seemed Dwayne was making about P and C. Good job!
JJ
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
Apparently Paige is quite happy to let Cash be her tour guide. Although her plans don't seem to include a new romance, I can tell that she accepts Cash's southern charm.
Cash seems quite taken with the rich New England girl, but he may be a little overwhelmed by her obvious wealth. I'm certain he will spend plenty of spare time looking for any secrets the old mansion may contain.
Are Savannah ghost tours as exciting as those in New Orleans? Both cities have a colorful history that includes both slaves and pirates. That gives the story a great background. Keep up the good storytelling.
Love and Irish Hugs,
Roger
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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Hi Barbara:)
Apparently Paige is quite happy to let Cash be her tour guide. Although her plans don't seem to include a new romance, I can tell that she accepts Cash's southern charm.
Cash seems quite taken with the rich New England girl, but he may be a little overwhelmed by her obvious wealth. I'm certain he will spend plenty of spare time looking for any secrets the old mansion may contain.
Are Savannah ghost tours as exciting as those in New Orleans? Both cities have a colorful history that includes both slaves and pirates. That gives the story a great background. Keep up the good storytelling.
Love and Irish Hugs,
Roger
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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We will dicover a little when they go on thier ghost tours. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from dhee khaye
Thumbs up! What a great story. Your novel fits your title. The image that you put was awesome and suited in your subject. Great job. God Bless.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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Thumbs up! What a great story. Your novel fits your title. The image that you put was awesome and suited in your subject. Great job. God Bless.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
The picture is just perfect for this Pirates' House chapter and fan (not expensive) things to do. I liked how Cash directed Paige toward the Savannah River. I love rivers crossing the city's, just like in San Antonio.
Best wishes Barbara in this new school year. We'll wait for Sundays to enjoy reading your wonderful written.
Please, take care!
:)
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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The picture is just perfect for this Pirates' House chapter and fan (not expensive) things to do. I liked how Cash directed Paige toward the Savannah River. I love rivers crossing the city's, just like in San Antonio.
Best wishes Barbara in this new school year. We'll wait for Sundays to enjoy reading your wonderful written.
Please, take care!
:)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
A well penned post and continuation of this story. It's building well, great pace for the reader. Your imagery and scene play was wonderful. I felt as if I was there.
Still hooked and enjoying the read.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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A well penned post and continuation of this story. It's building well, great pace for the reader. Your imagery and scene play was wonderful. I felt as if I was there.
Still hooked and enjoying the read.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 19-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from dthomas6985
Very very nice, I love the essence put into your story. I mean your words had me thinking about some of my past. In a good way :-) I love the feeling put into it. Continue what your doing, much success. Much blessings. Smiles to you, here's mine :-)
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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Very very nice, I love the essence put into your story. I mean your words had me thinking about some of my past. In a good way :-) I love the feeling put into it. Continue what your doing, much success. Much blessings. Smiles to you, here's mine :-)
Comment Written 19-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
barbara:
My daughter returns to work on August 23rd although she
taught summer school and has had to work numerous days
in August so she has not had much of a summer this year.
I'm going to help her set up her classroom tomorrow.
Why do I get the impression Dwayne Baker thinks he is
better than Cash? I always find that amazing. I hope
there are lots of tunnels in Paige's house. It would be
fun to explore them.
thanks for sharing
hope you have a great school year
love,
jan
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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barbara:
My daughter returns to work on August 23rd although she
taught summer school and has had to work numerous days
in August so she has not had much of a summer this year.
I'm going to help her set up her classroom tomorrow.
Why do I get the impression Dwayne Baker thinks he is
better than Cash? I always find that amazing. I hope
there are lots of tunnels in Paige's house. It would be
fun to explore them.
thanks for sharing
hope you have a great school year
love,
jan
Comment Written 19-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from TammyGail
Ever happy to have a six for you - this chapter was great indeed well written like always - vividly expressed
loved your closing and that last line .. thanks for the
notes and the read it was a pleasure ..
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Ever happy to have a six for you - this chapter was great indeed well written like always - vividly expressed
loved your closing and that last line .. thanks for the
notes and the read it was a pleasure ..
Comment Written 19-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Barbara, this is a vivid piece, the more so with the complementing picture. Now I'm expecting Sunday with Cash and his mother.
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Hi, Barbara, this is a vivid piece, the more so with the complementing picture. Now I'm expecting Sunday with Cash and his mother.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Stalking Wolf
Another great segment added to this story. Writer is bringing the couple together smoothly and at good pace. Wonder how this Dwayne is going to muddy the water? Like the part about the other 2 women not having alot of extra cash. Realistic,enjoyed.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2012
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Another great segment added to this story. Writer is bringing the couple together smoothly and at good pace. Wonder how this Dwayne is going to muddy the water? Like the part about the other 2 women not having alot of extra cash. Realistic,enjoyed.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate your support.
