Savannah Love
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84 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi Barbara,
I like how Paige and Cash are moving closer together, inch by inch! Something tells me the trip toward Savannah love ain't gonna be easy.
Enjoyed this chapter a lot.
Cheers * Keep Smilin'... Jax
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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Hi Barbara,
I like how Paige and Cash are moving closer together, inch by inch! Something tells me the trip toward Savannah love ain't gonna be easy.
Enjoyed this chapter a lot.
Cheers * Keep Smilin'... Jax
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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It was not. LOL Thank you for going back and reading.
Comment from Sankey
Aww! Does that mean we have to wait longer for the next exciting episode after you start back teaching huh! This is a fabulous story. paige does not come across as a snob which I do like about her. Cash might be a nice partner. Good work. Keep it up! NO SPAGS!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Aww! Does that mean we have to wait longer for the next exciting episode after you start back teaching huh! This is a fabulous story. paige does not come across as a snob which I do like about her. Cash might be a nice partner. Good work. Keep it up! NO SPAGS!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from justmarly
You are good. I am enjoying your story. Couldn't get to it today as much as I wanted to but keep writing. Wish I could eb this good. MJ
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2013
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You are good. I am enjoying your story. Couldn't get to it today as much as I wanted to but keep writing. Wish I could eb this good. MJ
Comment Written 11-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the support. You're great.
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You are so welcome. Glad to be able to help. We all need that to pull ahead. MJ
Comment from NaughtieScribe
This is a great continuation from the restaurant scene. And don't think I didn't pick up on the teaser at the end "another man." What the heck, what other man, why aren't they a couple, what happened besides her aunt dying that made Paige uproot and come south? You got some explaining to do. So I guess I read on. lol
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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This is a great continuation from the restaurant scene. And don't think I didn't pick up on the teaser at the end "another man." What the heck, what other man, why aren't they a couple, what happened besides her aunt dying that made Paige uproot and come south? You got some explaining to do. So I guess I read on. lol
Comment Written 21-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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We will find out about Paige's other man. I appreciate you reading from here.
Comment from mtnspirit
Hi Barbara,
I see several mysteries beginning to unwind in this story. Is there really tunnels, who are the ghost, and will Paige find more than she bargained for. And for some reason I feel as though this Dewayne Baker, will play a much larger role in the story.
Your writing is great and a very enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2012
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Hi Barbara,
I see several mysteries beginning to unwind in this story. Is there really tunnels, who are the ghost, and will Paige find more than she bargained for. And for some reason I feel as though this Dewayne Baker, will play a much larger role in the story.
Your writing is great and a very enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2012
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Thank you.
Comment from J. D. Means
Very nice story. I love Savannah! Maybe because they put some of the tourist money back into the city to keep it nice. The thousand parks, the beautiful antebellum homes with the tall columns.
I think you brought out the flavor of River Street, and the type of people that live there, very well. Fixing cars and fishing are a favorite pastime.
You seem to know the people and the area very well. You brought back a lot of memories.
Great Story!
Joe
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Very nice story. I love Savannah! Maybe because they put some of the tourist money back into the city to keep it nice. The thousand parks, the beautiful antebellum homes with the tall columns.
I think you brought out the flavor of River Street, and the type of people that live there, very well. Fixing cars and fishing are a favorite pastime.
You seem to know the people and the area very well. You brought back a lot of memories.
Great Story!
Joe
Comment Written 23-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from Onixxiya
I am quite sure his southern charm would catch any girl off-guard. I was terribly taken with him and his gentlemanliess.
Sounds like this is going to be a super read!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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I am quite sure his southern charm would catch any girl off-guard. I was terribly taken with him and his gentlemanliess.
Sounds like this is going to be a super read!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from EMB
This chapter was captivating, and it moved with a purposeful pace. I only found one thing for you to consider:
"Working on my old car and fishing." (I think he meant to say "work" and "fish.")
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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This chapter was captivating, and it moved with a purposeful pace. I only found one thing for you to consider:
"Working on my old car and fishing." (I think he meant to say "work" and "fish.")
Comment Written 23-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gargantuan2
This is a very effective dialog sequence. The idea of consecutive future event for a character not previously inclined toward those events is amusing. I did not spot any typos or such, and I think the length of the piece is fine too. Keep up the good work :)
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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This is a very effective dialog sequence. The idea of consecutive future event for a character not previously inclined toward those events is amusing. I did not spot any typos or such, and I think the length of the piece is fine too. Keep up the good work :)
Comment Written 23-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Hi Barbara. Just caught up with your story. It's going very well. Sorry you'll have to change your schedule, but you love you time with the children teaching. It sound like life is going well.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Hi Barbara. Just caught up with your story. It's going very well. Sorry you'll have to change your schedule, but you love you time with the children teaching. It sound like life is going well.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
