Savannah Love
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Comment from Maureen's Pen
This is a great post Barbara. Kept my attention all the way through. Great imagery, and character dialogue.
I liked the pace, well done throughout.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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This is a great post Barbara. Kept my attention all the way through. Great imagery, and character dialogue.
I liked the pace, well done throughout.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Barbara, there are many hints here for whatever there is to come... I I become more curious of Paige, Cash, Karen, and Savannah itself! Interesting chapter.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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Hi, Barbara, there are many hints here for whatever there is to come... I I become more curious of Paige, Cash, Karen, and Savannah itself! Interesting chapter.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from fictionwriter
Another wonderful addition to the story. I wonder too what is going on between Cash and the waitress. Loved it, only one small thing.
the couple walked toward the river.
As they walked, Cash pointed out the differ(walked and walked used too close together. I suggest changing the second to meandered or something to that effect)
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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Another wonderful addition to the story. I wonder too what is going on between Cash and the waitress. Loved it, only one small thing.
the couple walked toward the river.
As they walked, Cash pointed out the differ(walked and walked used too close together. I suggest changing the second to meandered or something to that effect)
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and I'll check that area out.
Comment from Stalking Wolf
Another great chapter. It has good dialogue and keeps the readers interest. Reader wonders is house haunted? If so by who and why. Why did Cash leave the waitress a big tip. Enjoyed.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Another great chapter. It has good dialogue and keeps the readers interest. Reader wonders is house haunted? If so by who and why. Why did Cash leave the waitress a big tip. Enjoyed.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I enjoyed reading your questions.
Comment from Sasha
I couldn't help but chuckle. My mother loved 'northern' tea while I like mine very sweet. Fascinating chapter with lots of historical information. I find Cash a fun guy. Paige seems to like him too.
I didn't find anything that needs changing. Still a very good chapter. I'm off to read the next chapter.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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I couldn't help but chuckle. My mother loved 'northern' tea while I like mine very sweet. Fascinating chapter with lots of historical information. I find Cash a fun guy. Paige seems to like him too.
I didn't find anything that needs changing. Still a very good chapter. I'm off to read the next chapter.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from adewpearl
Cash said in his deepest southern drawl - Southern
What happened to that southern accent - Southern
I like the flirtatious dialogue
and the non-verbal communication like when she tilts her head and smiles
I must be Southern at heart - I love sweet tea LOL
Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Cash said in his deepest southern drawl - Southern
What happened to that southern accent - Southern
I like the flirtatious dialogue
and the non-verbal communication like when she tilts her head and smiles
I must be Southern at heart - I love sweet tea LOL
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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I thought I had caught all those lower case letters. I obiviously didn't. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from MaryYu11
As usual you have brought mystery, history and soliloquy. This has captured me and my imagination. This is part of my summertime reads!!! Love it all.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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As usual you have brought mystery, history and soliloquy. This has captured me and my imagination. This is part of my summertime reads!!! Love it all.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Very enjoyable. I enjoyed the banter between Paige and Cash. There's some attraction going on there. The bit with the dialect was cute. And the sweet tea! A true hallmark of a southern-set novel. They do like their sweet tea. (I don't) The talk about tunnels was interesting, and surely leads up to action regarding tunnels to come. Paige shows her interest in Cash by wondering how friendly he was with the waitress. Great work. judi
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Very enjoyable. I enjoyed the banter between Paige and Cash. There's some attraction going on there. The bit with the dialect was cute. And the sweet tea! A true hallmark of a southern-set novel. They do like their sweet tea. (I don't) The talk about tunnels was interesting, and surely leads up to action regarding tunnels to come. Paige shows her interest in Cash by wondering how friendly he was with the waitress. Great work. judi
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Barb,
looks like you have Paige and Cash in a good relationship Now I wonder how far this will go(do I see Romance in the picture)
Pirates what an interesting touch in your story.
You must be leading to something good.
Like meeting ghost from the past?
Gert
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Hi Barb,
looks like you have Paige and Cash in a good relationship Now I wonder how far this will go(do I see Romance in the picture)
Pirates what an interesting touch in your story.
You must be leading to something good.
Like meeting ghost from the past?
Gert
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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you are welcome
LOL
Gert
Comment from Deejharrington
I agree with Paige about sweet tea! Ugh! Give me just plain sun tea anytime. Well, it looks like things are getting real cozy between the new Southern Belle and the smooth talkin' good ole boy! I look forward to see how it and they progress. When are we going see some ghosts??:)
deb
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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I agree with Paige about sweet tea! Ugh! Give me just plain sun tea anytime. Well, it looks like things are getting real cozy between the new Southern Belle and the smooth talkin' good ole boy! I look forward to see how it and they progress. When are we going see some ghosts??:)
deb
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Ghosts or discussion of ghosts come up very soon. Thank you for the kind review.
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:) you're welcome
deb
