Savannah Love
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Comment from rheabug
As always this is the beginning of a well planned book. You have talent of story telling which is clear in this presentation. Good job and God Bless! Linda
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2012
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As always this is the beginning of a well planned book. You have talent of story telling which is clear in this presentation. Good job and God Bless! Linda
Comment Written 19-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from elgone
The story is progressing well. Paige is showing some interest in Cash and a bit of jealous interest in why Cash left Karen a big tip. Of course Cash is interested in Paige. He flirted with her earlier. She played it cool but she knows he's interested.
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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2012
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The story is progressing well. Paige is showing some interest in Cash and a bit of jealous interest in why Cash left Karen a big tip. Of course Cash is interested in Paige. He flirted with her earlier. She played it cool but she knows he's interested.
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Comment Written 19-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
barbara:
Yes, it seems the further south one goes, the sweeter the
tea gets. My mom was from Rockford, IL and said the first
time she had tea in VA it almost set her teeth back in her
head -- LOL! Of course, she had to learn to make it that
way to please my dad who was a good ole VA boy.
Can't wait to see all the ways the haunting occurs in
this house.
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2012
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barbara:
Yes, it seems the further south one goes, the sweeter the
tea gets. My mom was from Rockford, IL and said the first
time she had tea in VA it almost set her teeth back in her
head -- LOL! Of course, she had to learn to make it that
way to please my dad who was a good ole VA boy.
Can't wait to see all the ways the haunting occurs in
this house.
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
Comment Written 19-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I am from Morrison, IL and it's not that far from Rockford. Only my hometown only has 4,000 people in it.
Comment from dhee khaye
From the photo to the story, Thumbs up! what a great story. I like it. It is well understood. Your story is full of unforgettable scene Keep writing. God Bless.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2012
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From the photo to the story, Thumbs up! what a great story. I like it. It is well understood. Your story is full of unforgettable scene Keep writing. God Bless.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jen Gentry
Barb
I cannot wait to learn more about the old house and the history behind it you have piqued my interest and added some conflict with tension in the north vs south theme. I think your characters are just starting to develop in the story and look forward to learning more about them.
Be Blessed
Jenny
By the way being a sort of Southern Belle myself I found the dialogue endearing.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2012
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Barb
I cannot wait to learn more about the old house and the history behind it you have piqued my interest and added some conflict with tension in the north vs south theme. I think your characters are just starting to develop in the story and look forward to learning more about them.
Be Blessed
Jenny
By the way being a sort of Southern Belle myself I found the dialogue endearing.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
I feel like this is a build up chapter. It already has Paige wondering how well Cash knows Karen. Not something she would idly thing about. So Cash is starting to get under her skin. Good. We already know Cash likes her. The way you mix a bit of history into this chapter is kewl. It felt like a natural conversation. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2012
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I feel like this is a build up chapter. It already has Paige wondering how well Cash knows Karen. Not something she would idly thing about. So Cash is starting to get under her skin. Good. We already know Cash likes her. The way you mix a bit of history into this chapter is kewl. It felt like a natural conversation. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from hari anand
I am a follower of romance fiction....savannah love, this chapter is interesting , easy to go through......nice picture as well...
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2012
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I am a follower of romance fiction....savannah love, this chapter is interesting , easy to go through......nice picture as well...
Comment Written 18-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Onixxiya
You write some intriguing characters, I am already wondering about their back-stories. It is wonderful to be able to put some of your own memories into fiction, it gives something more than simply researching does. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2012
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You write some intriguing characters, I am already wondering about their back-stories. It is wonderful to be able to put some of your own memories into fiction, it gives something more than simply researching does. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
It's good to know The Pirate House is still there, Barbara. A nice mixture of fact ( the cobbles were ship ballast) and romantic fiction. Can't wait to meet the ghost. :) nancy
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2012
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It's good to know The Pirate House is still there, Barbara. A nice mixture of fact ( the cobbles were ship ballast) and romantic fiction. Can't wait to meet the ghost. :) nancy
Comment Written 18-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Cleo Belle
I am thrown into the American civil war and the effects and cliches of what we Brits expect to hear - and you do it very well. One of my favourite books is Gone with the Wind - and I still think of Tara and the passions of all who fought on both sides! Lovely.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2012
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I am thrown into the American civil war and the effects and cliches of what we Brits expect to hear - and you do it very well. One of my favourite books is Gone with the Wind - and I still think of Tara and the passions of all who fought on both sides! Lovely.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2012
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I am confused. You gave me a five star review, but only four stars. What do I need to improve to bring it up to five stars?
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Hi Barbara, I think i would like to see it edited, so that the story content was the same, but the word count was less.
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so you are saying it's too long?
