Savannah Love
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61 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hey Barb,
How well indeed. Nice back and forth between these two. Great imagery with the waitress taking their order, delivering their drinks, and Paige twirling her fry in the ketchup.
Will be interesting if there will be a 'cat fight' between the two gals over Cash before it's all over.
Cheers & Keep Smilin'... Jax
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Hey Barb,
How well indeed. Nice back and forth between these two. Great imagery with the waitress taking their order, delivering their drinks, and Paige twirling her fry in the ketchup.
Will be interesting if there will be a 'cat fight' between the two gals over Cash before it's all over.
Cheers & Keep Smilin'... Jax
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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You're wonderful.
Comment from Sankey
Still loving the story. I don't mind working my way threouggh here. Glad I ain't hehe found no Spags ya'll yeat!! HEHE!! Sounds like Cash might be a fake Red neck huh!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Still loving the story. I don't mind working my way threouggh here. Glad I ain't hehe found no Spags ya'll yeat!! HEHE!! Sounds like Cash might be a fake Red neck huh!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. Cash is Cash.
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Yep saw this one
Comment from mtnspirit
Hi Barbara,
Enjoyed the read. Everything seemed fine but, I do have a question...
When they crossed River Street, Paige bent down and touched the smooth-shaped stones. "This is cobblestone."
"I think it's original." He smiled, then pointed toward a small building.
If Cash is a builder wouldn't he know for certain whether the stones were real or not. Just a thought for you to think about.
A good write, smooth and thoroughly enjoyable. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2012
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Hi Barbara,
Enjoyed the read. Everything seemed fine but, I do have a question...
When they crossed River Street, Paige bent down and touched the smooth-shaped stones. "This is cobblestone."
"I think it's original." He smiled, then pointed toward a small building.
If Cash is a builder wouldn't he know for certain whether the stones were real or not. Just a thought for you to think about.
A good write, smooth and thoroughly enjoyable. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2012
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Thank you for kind review.
Comment from donaldww
The thing I found interesting about this installment you might find amusing: the difference between north and south tea. I've never heard of that, but for sure, I hate the taste of sugar in tea!
I guess I've never had a true 'Southern' tea.
I couldn't see an SPAG issues here.
DW
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012
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The thing I found interesting about this installment you might find amusing: the difference between north and south tea. I've never heard of that, but for sure, I hate the taste of sugar in tea!
I guess I've never had a true 'Southern' tea.
I couldn't see an SPAG issues here.
DW
Comment Written 21-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Readywriter52
Cash knows how to charm women, but Paige won't succumb to them. She wants to know more about her home. Cash and Paige seem to get together well. He even bought her lunch.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012
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Cash knows how to charm women, but Paige won't succumb to them. She wants to know more about her home. Cash and Paige seem to get together well. He even bought her lunch.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Adri7enne
Sounds like Cash has designs on the little Yankee girl. LOL! A southern accent that comes and goes. Mmn! Maybe she shouldn't trust him too far.
Well written dialogue with a good mix of narration.
Well done, spag free. Good chapter, Barb.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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Sounds like Cash has designs on the little Yankee girl. LOL! A southern accent that comes and goes. Mmn! Maybe she shouldn't trust him too far.
Well written dialogue with a good mix of narration.
Well done, spag free. Good chapter, Barb.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hello again Barbara
This chapter is my favorite so far. I am thinking that Paige, Cash, Karen, are developing well, and the story line as well. I love Savannah and am looking forward to your next chapter
Bear
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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Hello again Barbara
This chapter is my favorite so far. I am thinking that Paige, Cash, Karen, are developing well, and the story line as well. I love Savannah and am looking forward to your next chapter
Bear
Comment Written 19-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from unimatrix001
The story in unfolding well. Characters are developing with rich personalities. Excellent writing, no gremlins to be found.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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The story in unfolding well. Characters are developing with rich personalities. Excellent writing, no gremlins to be found.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from vfbryant
Great chapter. Your characters continue to develop into very likable and enjoyable people, the hint of a budding romance is in the air, there is talk of pirates and haunted houses, and the scenes are well described. It's a very easy read, and would be fun to continue.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2012
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Great chapter. Your characters continue to develop into very likable and enjoyable people, the hint of a budding romance is in the air, there is talk of pirates and haunted houses, and the scenes are well described. It's a very easy read, and would be fun to continue.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from pickthorn
This story has the suspense building from the early beginning. I really like the setting taking place in Savannah, Georgia with the mystery of Blackbeard's ghost
lingering in the background.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2012
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This story has the suspense building from the early beginning. I really like the setting taking place in Savannah, Georgia with the mystery of Blackbeard's ghost
lingering in the background.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
