Savannah Love
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Comment from Stalking Wolf
Well written, very realistic happenings keys locked in car, women shopping trips, realistic is a good thing. Reader wonders is ghost ol' William T. Such a shame a Yankee haunting a good Southern house. Enjoyed.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012
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Well written, very realistic happenings keys locked in car, women shopping trips, realistic is a good thing. Reader wonders is ghost ol' William T. Such a shame a Yankee haunting a good Southern house. Enjoyed.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I wonder who that ghost just might be. lol
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Enjoying, I'll wait and see.
Comment from judiverse
Hi, Barbara. I really enjoyed this and am going with 6 stars. You introduce an interesting character in Mary, and the dialogue is great and helps advance the story. The background you gave about Bradley and Alice comes into play here, and the thought of a ghost adds to the excitement. I thought you might give Cash more of a southern accent. This is going to be a great example of a romantic historical mystery. Great start! judi
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Hi, Barbara. I really enjoyed this and am going with 6 stars. You introduce an interesting character in Mary, and the dialogue is great and helps advance the story. The background you gave about Bradley and Alice comes into play here, and the thought of a ghost adds to the excitement. I thought you might give Cash more of a southern accent. This is going to be a great example of a romantic historical mystery. Great start! judi
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012
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Cash is extremely well educated, which will come out later. Billy Joe is not well educated and that's why I give him more of a southern accent. I have had reviewers tell me the southern accent is irrating. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're so welcome. Sometimes even the well-educated like to assume a southern accent when they're inclined. (Ask the politicians) You might have Cash use it occasionally if he wants to yankd Paige's chain. judi
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In an upcoming post, I do have him go into a deep southern accent. I even have Paige attempt one.
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That should be fun. Light-hearted moments are good when you're dealing with ghosts. judi
Comment from Wes Guptill
Very nice work you have going here. And I have to admit that I am a little biased in my opinion of the book, sepcifically for its setting: Savannah. I resided in that strange and beautiful town (well, most of it is beautiful, if you stay north of Derenne Avenue, that is...) for more than fifteen years. I was whisked back there immediately when I saw the shot of River Street.
Your characters and 'history' are well-rendered, and the content is quite genuine and believable. I am intrigued by your inclusion of the ghostly element for which Savannah is renowned. This only makes me want to keep coming back. Which I will be doing.
Excellent work, dear lady.
Cheers!
Wes Guptill
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012
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Very nice work you have going here. And I have to admit that I am a little biased in my opinion of the book, sepcifically for its setting: Savannah. I resided in that strange and beautiful town (well, most of it is beautiful, if you stay north of Derenne Avenue, that is...) for more than fifteen years. I was whisked back there immediately when I saw the shot of River Street.
Your characters and 'history' are well-rendered, and the content is quite genuine and believable. I am intrigued by your inclusion of the ghostly element for which Savannah is renowned. This only makes me want to keep coming back. Which I will be doing.
Excellent work, dear lady.
Cheers!
Wes Guptill
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement. Please don't hesitate to set me straight if I make a mistake in history. It's my subject, but I have been there and I do a lot of research.
Comment from justatuna
You do a great job here. Very well written. Excellent imagery. I haven't read this work before, but it's something that caught my interest. Very easy to read and kept me moving. Great job.
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You do a great job here. Very well written. Excellent imagery. I haven't read this work before, but it's something that caught my interest. Very easy to read and kept me moving. Great job.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
I think Paige and Cash like each other. Your story is excellent and I enjoy reading every word. I want to know if they are still fighting the Civil War.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012
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I think Paige and Cash like each other. Your story is excellent and I enjoy reading every word. I want to know if they are still fighting the Civil War.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi BArb good what I like about you new chapters,you always have something interesting to draw my attention
It seems to me Pagie is doing well (if I'm correct meeting new folks?)
Wonder what you are going to come up with next
Maybe meet a spirit
Gert
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012
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Hi BArb good what I like about you new chapters,you always have something interesting to draw my attention
It seems to me Pagie is doing well (if I'm correct meeting new folks?)
Wonder what you are going to come up with next
Maybe meet a spirit
Gert
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
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You are so welcome Barb
Gert
Comment from Deejharrington
Paige appears to be fitting in quite well, for a yankee:) Making friends and learning so much about the house's history. Maybe she's find out which one is haunting it. Maybe one of them is insulted to have a northern living in it. Its going a long very well. I'm enjoying the characters and the plot line.
deb
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012
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Paige appears to be fitting in quite well, for a yankee:) Making friends and learning so much about the house's history. Maybe she's find out which one is haunting it. Maybe one of them is insulted to have a northern living in it. Its going a long very well. I'm enjoying the characters and the plot line.
deb
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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you're welcome
deb
Comment from Sasha
My previous comments apply to this one as well. I plan to continue reading this but won't be leaving a comment unless I find something I think requires your attention. Hope that is okay with you.
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My previous comments apply to this one as well. I plan to continue reading this but won't be leaving a comment unless I find something I think requires your attention. Hope that is okay with you.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I think Paige is quite taken with Cash and unless I am wrong he may feel the same about her. I'm glad Paige has found a friend in Mary. If the house is haunted she will need all the friends she can get! Great chapter which I have come to expect of you.....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012
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Hi Barbara,
I think Paige is quite taken with Cash and unless I am wrong he may feel the same about her. I'm glad Paige has found a friend in Mary. If the house is haunted she will need all the friends she can get! Great chapter which I have come to expect of you.....blessings, chey
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gungalo
Good stuff Barbara and I can see it is playing towards something. You have a master plan and it will show itself soon. In the mean time, keep it coming as you are.
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Good stuff Barbara and I can see it is playing towards something. You have a master plan and it will show itself soon. In the mean time, keep it coming as you are.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, I have this novel all laid out. I am putting numerous hints in, not many are catching them, yet.
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Sneaky girl.
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lol
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Well you are, you!!!
