Savannah Love
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Comment from RazberryBullet
Got a chuckle here:...Cash and Billy Joe watched until she drove out of sight. Cash took a drink of water. "Wanta bet she gets lost?" "Nope." Billy Joe laughed.
Loved this:..."Think I'll ever figure this town out?" "I have hope."
If you went to Savannah, you'll love the ghosts :)
Well done!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2012
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Got a chuckle here:...Cash and Billy Joe watched until she drove out of sight. Cash took a drink of water. "Wanta bet she gets lost?" "Nope." Billy Joe laughed.
Loved this:..."Think I'll ever figure this town out?" "I have hope."
If you went to Savannah, you'll love the ghosts :)
Well done!
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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2012
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Yes, I have been to Savannah and really want to go back. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Titanx9
It's been a while since I've read some of your work, Barbara, and it's as good as ever. Your characters are well-defined and the dialogue sound authentic. I wonder about the language in two places, however. Do people still say "Mammie" for "nana" or "mom" these days? "Purdy" rather than "pretty," seems a bit contrived as well. Other than that, this sounds like a great story. I'll try to read your next release. Well done!!
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It's been a while since I've read some of your work, Barbara, and it's as good as ever. Your characters are well-defined and the dialogue sound authentic. I wonder about the language in two places, however. Do people still say "Mammie" for "nana" or "mom" these days? "Purdy" rather than "pretty," seems a bit contrived as well. Other than that, this sounds like a great story. I'll try to read your next release. Well done!!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2012
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Yes, they do in certain parts of the country. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara
The young lady certainly is a little unsettled and the vanishing paint brushes could certainly make it a bit more so.
Poor ole Cash getting arrested, the finding his toolbox full of dirty paint brushes ...
Patrick
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2012
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Hi Barbara
The young lady certainly is a little unsettled and the vanishing paint brushes could certainly make it a bit more so.
Poor ole Cash getting arrested, the finding his toolbox full of dirty paint brushes ...
Patrick
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I am really enjoying this novel. Your imagery, conversations and descriptive phrasing is interesting. When I was in North Carolina we toured some of the oldest home there and all of them are beautiful. I couldn't help dreaming that I lived in one of them. Another excellent chapter....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2012
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Hi Barbara,
I am really enjoying this novel. Your imagery, conversations and descriptive phrasing is interesting. When I was in North Carolina we toured some of the oldest home there and all of them are beautiful. I couldn't help dreaming that I lived in one of them. Another excellent chapter....blessings, chey
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Thank you for the kind review. I love the old homes too.
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
Hi another good chapter to your story WHICH is well written and needs no change. Very well displayed and descriptive script.I enjoyed reading your story. Maryd
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Hi another good chapter to your story WHICH is well written and needs no change. Very well displayed and descriptive script.I enjoyed reading your story. Maryd
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from kashmayank
ery nice work,captured the emotions in a perfect way,enjoyed it nice thoughts and nice implementation all the best for future deserves its place among best
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ery nice work,captured the emotions in a perfect way,enjoyed it nice thoughts and nice implementation all the best for future deserves its place among best
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from AprilShower
Great! I am enjoying the story. I am wondering how her paint brushes got into the tool box. Looks like Cash would like to get to know her better. This is well written and held my interest, Barbara. It makes me want to read more. :o)
April
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Great! I am enjoying the story. I am wondering how her paint brushes got into the tool box. Looks like Cash would like to get to know her better. This is well written and held my interest, Barbara. It makes me want to read more. :o)
April
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Writingfundimension
A great chaper, barbara. It has all the best elements in place for a great romance. I love how you have Cash and Paige already depending on each other. Though not much has been revealed about him, I would be inclined to trust him, too. Savannah is such a beautiful city. If I'd ever attended an art school, that would have been my choice. I'm going to enjoy following this story along. Warmest regards, Bev
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2012
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A great chaper, barbara. It has all the best elements in place for a great romance. I love how you have Cash and Paige already depending on each other. Though not much has been revealed about him, I would be inclined to trust him, too. Savannah is such a beautiful city. If I'd ever attended an art school, that would have been my choice. I'm going to enjoy following this story along. Warmest regards, Bev
Comment Written 11-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, barbara.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
This is a fabulous post Barbara. You had me completely hooked for the whole chapter. Loving your character depth and my favourites of Paige and Cash sure are great keeping me filled as a reader.
Excellent work my friend. I would have given this a sixer if I had one. I loved everything about it.
Thanks for sharing, can't wait till the next post.
Maureen
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This is a fabulous post Barbara. You had me completely hooked for the whole chapter. Loving your character depth and my favourites of Paige and Cash sure are great keeping me filled as a reader.
Excellent work my friend. I would have given this a sixer if I had one. I loved everything about it.
Thanks for sharing, can't wait till the next post.
Maureen
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Good intrigue in this chapter, Barbara.
You are describing the scenes well, putting
us there. The thought of a ghost is chilling.
You've left me wanting more.
Great picture - I love those old houses. We visited
quite a few on our trips around the States.
Margaret
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2012
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Good intrigue in this chapter, Barbara.
You are describing the scenes well, putting
us there. The thought of a ghost is chilling.
You've left me wanting more.
Great picture - I love those old houses. We visited
quite a few on our trips around the States.
Margaret
Comment Written 11-Aug-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
