Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Oh yes you have done very well again my friend I am really enjoying this myself I must be a child at heart you have again done well this is action packed and leaves the reader wondering where Hershy is so they will be wanting to read on I enjoyed regards Jill

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 Comment Written 05-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012

Oh Jill, you can't know how much it means to me to hear you say that you are enjoying it! I don't know if I told you this, but I have been waiting a long time to write this book, and while it is intended for children, I also want it to appeal to children of all ages, and parents who read it to younger children! I know I've bitten off a lot, but it is a dream for me, so I am hoping for the reaction you just gave me!!! Bless you my friend!

Comment from TammyGail

Excellent

Great work crafting this chapter Ideasaregems-Dawn
it was well written and expressed throughout
keeping my att throughout - great use of imagery as well
thanks for sharing it was a pleasure

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 Comment Written 05-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012

Thank you so much TammyGail! I am very pleased that you liked it!