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An Orange Siamese

Note: THIS IS THE OLD 'HERSHY' - THE NEW ONE IS MUCH BETTER.

20 total reviews 
Comment from evilynne
Exceptional
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Rating of Prologue - Sample- The Adventures of Hershy
This is a wonderful witty little tale of a mischievous feline. It well written; of course, we have to read more about Hershey
now. The background information is interesting. Evi

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2023

Comment from Bill Schott
Exceptional
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Rating of Prologue - Sample- The Adventures of Hershy
This is a riotous beginning as Chocolate steals the show from the opening of the door to the final thought of the chapter. So funny how understanding Anne is and how embarrassed Gail. Wait! Twelve ponds?

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2023
    Twelve pounds ain't nothin' -- LOL. (The real Hershy was heavier.) Thanks so much, Bill! (Woot, woot -- he liked it, he liked it!)
Comment from Wendy G
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Sounds like a fun book. It also sounds like Hershy's adventures are the sort that are a bit embarrassing at first, but then bring lots of laughter and amusement when the tales are told. Well done. Looking forward to more.
Wendy

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Hershy sounds delightful, adventurous and mischievous too. Congratulations on your new book Dawn and I expect we shall be reading more about this cat's naughty antics! Much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2023

Comment from Teri7
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Dawn, I loved reading this! I hope you are going to put it all on here for us to read and review. It was quite funny and a great enjoyment to read. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This is a fun story/chapter where Hershy shares a little bit too much of his sauciness (pun intended) with an important visitor. Here is the hapless victim of his traipsing around the kitchen or dinner: Gail Winters rubbed her fingers together and blushed, her cheeks now bright pink. Mrs. Winters was certainly diplomatic by calling it 'oily' instead of 'greasy.' Fun read.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Exceptional
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Rating of Prologue - Sample- The Adventures of Hershy
Hi Dawn,
Congratulations on a fine chapter sure to entice young and old alike.
People and mischievous animals are always a story unfolding and more often than not bring smiles or laughter.
I enjoyed this enticing chapter so expertly written and beautifully presented.
Blessings
Shirley

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

Comment from Carol Clark2
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This sounds like a cute book. This chapter is well written, and it's quite humorous also. I think kids would enjoy reading the book. Thanks for sharing. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

Comment from country ranch writer
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We have several cats that if you leave food in the counter they will help themselves. It's like they think they should have people food no matter how much they get disciplined some times.they live steal fried fish and KFC chicken.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

Comment from country ranch writer
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We have several cats that if you leave food in the counter they will help themselves. It's like they think they should have people food no matter how much they get disciplined some times.they live steal fried fish and KFC chicken.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023