Leap
addiction67 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
'Leap' is a deeply emotional poem. Nice display of emotions. Well thoughout and written. Good rhymes. It matches the artwork well. Excellent.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2012
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'Leap' is a deeply emotional poem. Nice display of emotions. Well thoughout and written. Good rhymes. It matches the artwork well. Excellent.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind words. Thank you for taking the time to read the poem and commenting
Comment from Meta~Mark
Pierre, Envision the inevitable wilting away Wandering the path that leads astray...I like the don't rush to the path...take your time before you make the wrong move on socities woes..change to the new..for you and only you my friend..listen to no man..no being but your own instincts..
BRAVO..
MM
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2012
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Pierre, Envision the inevitable wilting away Wandering the path that leads astray...I like the don't rush to the path...take your time before you make the wrong move on socities woes..change to the new..for you and only you my friend..listen to no man..no being but your own instincts..
BRAVO..
MM
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind words. Thank you for taking the time to read the poem and commenting
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thanks Pierre you have talent..check out my latest release it's deep..keep up your excellent work my friend
Comment from Janie King
I am assuming this is a freedom from addiction...I have never travelled that road but it has to be a hard and lonely road to be on...there is a way to find freedom but God has to supply this strength for it is one that has such control over the human mind and will. God bless.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2012
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I am assuming this is a freedom from addiction...I have never travelled that road but it has to be a hard and lonely road to be on...there is a way to find freedom but God has to supply this strength for it is one that has such control over the human mind and will. God bless.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind words. Thank you for taking the time to read the poem and commenting
Comment from A.R. Curry
I'm really lad I read this. You did wonderful. Just the thing I needed to hear. That picture you chose is absolutely awesome as well. I will keep an eye out for more of your work. No suggestions. Very heartfelt
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2012
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I'm really lad I read this. You did wonderful. Just the thing I needed to hear. That picture you chose is absolutely awesome as well. I will keep an eye out for more of your work. No suggestions. Very heartfelt
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind words. Thank you for taking the time to read the poem and commenting
Comment from micci
Well written poem, I thought that you wrote with a lot of creativity, I enjoyed reading your poem a lot, the picture that you choose was perfect for your poem, great job
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Well written poem, I thought that you wrote with a lot of creativity, I enjoyed reading your poem a lot, the picture that you choose was perfect for your poem, great job
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to read the poem and commenting
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Thank you for the kind words. Thank you for taking the time to read the poem and commenting
Comment from uniqueauthor
We all feel this way sometimes, but the outcome is ours to choose.
When life hands us a bad apple,
cut out the rot and live again.
Depression is not easy to overcome,
but it can be done.
I enjoyed the read. This is a well-written poem.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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We all feel this way sometimes, but the outcome is ours to choose.
When life hands us a bad apple,
cut out the rot and live again.
Depression is not easy to overcome,
but it can be done.
I enjoyed the read. This is a well-written poem.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to read the poem and commenting
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You are welcome. Peace for today
Comment from ~Vincent Phelps~
Thsi poem is absolutely amazing to me. It brings a sense of inner-strenght that one finds when facing some of life's most difficult obstacles. This has got to be one of my favorites so far, and I will return to read it again. Thanks for sharing it.
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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Thsi poem is absolutely amazing to me. It brings a sense of inner-strenght that one finds when facing some of life's most difficult obstacles. This has got to be one of my favorites so far, and I will return to read it again. Thanks for sharing it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read the poem and commenting.
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You are welcome. Keep up the great writing!!!
