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Superstitions

A sound causes a physical reaction of fear.

3 total reviews 
Comment from THOEBEDOG
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VERY INTERESTING. HELD MY ATTENTION. FLOWED VERY SMOOTHLY. VERY PROFESSIONAL. BLAH...BLAH....BLAH. SOUNDS LIKE WAS WRITTEN BY ESTABLISHED WRITER. BRAVO!!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2011


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
    You review keeps telling me its new. I guess because I haven't replied. Anyways, I entered that contest under conditions with myself that if I won it, I would use the money for a full membership. Since I did not win with my, "blah. . .blah. . .blah" I've moved on to beforeitsnews.com and write under the pen name Justin Case there. I invite you to write for BIN also. Thanks for the review. Robin Graves/Justin Case/Mateo Stefano/Random Chance Peace!
Comment from ScarletClearwater
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I quickly bit my nails, then I laughed. Ha ha! Just like in real life. Great job of using so little words to convey such a human situation.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2011


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2011
    Thank you so much. I want to become an upgraded member but I don't want to pay anything to write. So if I win this truly free contest I am going to upgrade. I appreciate you review very much.
Comment from Green_Jello
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Haha, love this one! Very clever and funny and each line is wonderfully written. I like that the last line rhymes with the first too. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem :)

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2011


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2011
    Thank you! I want to become an upgraded member but I don't want to pay anything to write so if I win this contest, I will upgrade. Thanks again for your review.
reply by Green_Jello on 11-Sep-2011
    Oh my goodness, this site is so worth though it my opinion. I have been here a little over a month and absolutely love it. It has really helped me with my writers lock too which I had for a long time. I have met so many wonderful writers and for the most part everyone is friendly. Just be willing to except some tough critiques! I would not base joining on if you win or not though, as it is really well worth it without the win ;)
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2011
    Have you made money for your writing? I have another site I write for that is free and does pay a little bit of money for anything you submit and more if you win contests. I'm in first place right now for the best out of ten flash fiction stories under ten titles about "time". The site is helium.com and my pen name there is Mateo Stefano. I invite you to write there which is also well worth it. Thanks for your review again. I clicked on a thing to put you up for a "best reviewer" thing.
reply by Green_Jello on 11-Sep-2011
    This site offers several contests some you win real money, the ones that the commitee votes for and then others you win member dollars from contests started by other members, I have won one of those. Thank you, and I will indeed check that site out! :)