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A woman is stalked by a fan

23 total reviews 
Comment from fictionwriter
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You can't close a novel on this note, it leaves to much open and unanswered. I guess and waiting for the next one to come. Well done.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010
    Oh no, this isn't the end. We have two more chapters to go. Hope you liked this one and I'll see you again!

    Gayle
Comment from c_lucas
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This is a well written chapter, placing Cathy in danger, again. There is a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010
    Hey Charlie,

    Thanks a bunch for the great review and good wishes. I appreciate your support through this one!

    Hugs,
    Gayle
reply by c_lucas on 28-Feb-2010
    You're welcome, Gayle. Charlie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Well Norman is back. Why am I not surprised? I knew the authorities should have put his butt in jail for a very long time. Cathy is in danger again and I hope Rudy is aware of the possiblities.

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 Comment Written 28-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010
    Hey Barbara,

    Yeah, looks like he had ... well, Norman had bad intentions all along. Poor Nathan! He tried to be strong but not enough, I guess. Thanks again for the fine review and comments!

    Gayle