Comment from Nicky B

Excellent

When hiding from ones true feelings it can actually create larger problems down the track if they aren't expunged in some way. Poetry is a great way to purge negative emotions and touch other peoples hearts. You certainly have touched mine. God bless. Nick.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2010

I know sweet Nick,but the pain still scares me sometimes. Blessings and love, Ma

Comment from mtngalofnc

Excellent

Hi L&P,
The last stanza says it all. It is a place we all to often find ourselves. Your words are filled with such strong emotions. A pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing. I know at times, it is difficult.

Hugs Becky

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2010

oh Becky sweet friend. This really has me in the bends. Thank you. Blessings love, Barbara

Comment from amada

Excellent

I'm touched by these words, "I became love my entire being
soaked and blinded in its glow." I'm so happy for you, you are in my mind right now, glowing in the reflection of our love for you.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2010

Thank you dear amada. Blessings and love. Barbara

Comment from Kashif Ali Abbas

Average

A great effort indeed.The obscurity in the first stanza was leading to no meanings at all but only difficult words assembled together. The poetic style is good and if a message is conveyed it can be more effective.

Overall nice effort

K

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2010

Thank you. Blessings. Barbara

Comment from Plotosaurus

Excellent

Yes, when we decide to let in real emotion we receive the pleasant and the painful. Your poem presents a good theme for Valentine's Day. Well done.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2010

Thank you. Maybe I should have entered it. LOL Blessings. Barbara