Blind Trust
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Nathan's in charge"A woman is stalked by a fan
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Comment from toni guerrero
Very good story.You left me with a lonely feeling. Sometimes we have to know when to face reality. Keep up the good work.life is a challege.
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Very good story.You left me with a lonely feeling. Sometimes we have to know when to face reality. Keep up the good work.life is a challege.
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Thanks for the comments.
Gayle
Comment from patmedium
I have enjoyed this one. I was as relaxed as Nathan while I read it and I didn't react to Norman at all! Lovely, let's get back to Cathy sometime? She was such a large part of the earlier story. Pat.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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I have enjoyed this one. I was as relaxed as Nathan while I read it and I didn't react to Norman at all! Lovely, let's get back to Cathy sometime? She was such a large part of the earlier story. Pat.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Cathy's next, Pat! LOL, I get such a kick out of your great reviews. I'm so glad you're enjoying this one.
Thanks and hugs,
Gayle
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I am almost choking myself on the end of this damned lead, trying to get off to read the next one. Pat.
Comment from Korton
Another excellent chapter, Gayle. I wondered, but didn't know for sure, but Norman is going to be a big problem. Hell, Nathan barely got home before Norman started trying to but in. Very well done.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2010
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Another excellent chapter, Gayle. I wondered, but didn't know for sure, but Norman is going to be a big problem. Hell, Nathan barely got home before Norman started trying to but in. Very well done.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2010
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LOL! Well, Norman isn't going to take this sitting down. I just hope Nathan keeps his wits about him!
Did you get my latest email? Let me know! Thanks and hugs,
Gayle
Comment from ZigzagMLT
Another great chapter. What a change in Nathan. He is more outgoing, and seems like an interesting person to get to know. You very skillfully begin to break that down, or perhaps not, as Norman comes into the picture at the end of the chapter.
Well done.
A few things: or demand a life out of today? This sentence is a little awkward...
is wine glass one word or two?
Thanks,
Zigzagmlt
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2010
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Another great chapter. What a change in Nathan. He is more outgoing, and seems like an interesting person to get to know. You very skillfully begin to break that down, or perhaps not, as Norman comes into the picture at the end of the chapter.
Well done.
A few things: or demand a life out of today? This sentence is a little awkward...
is wine glass one word or two?
Thanks,
Zigzagmlt
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2010
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My 'puter likes it as one word, wineglass. No? Will check. Yes, in many ways, Nathan is like a teenager. His life has been so isolated and lonely he's never lived a real life as we know it. And then there's Norman!
Oh boy!
Thanks and hugs,
Gayle
