Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

what is "jodphers"? :-P

anyway, loved this chapter
didn't notice any spaggies, typos, or anything else to change or fix

thanx for sharing and i'll be waiting chapter 16 (make it soon!)

shelley :)

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2010

Hi shelley,

They're riding pants that end just below the ankle. They're worn with paddock boots, which go just above the ankle. :)

Glad you liked this one, I'm getting out of breath!

Gayle

Comment from ZigzagMLT

Good

Good. I love the descriptions of horse breath! Not my favourite thing. I prefer my horses on television or in books. Wish it were otherwise...

I liked learning more about Rudy. Wondering where that car that was following got to... good, you've left a question unanswered for the next chapter.

Some notes:
of being cliche or sounding cliche...

especially with this light traffic.

let's go outside.

last time she had worn them.

no one had brought him to the point of marriage


Thanks again!
Zigzagmlt

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 Comment Written 08-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2010

Hi Zig,

Thanks for stopping by and the review.

Gayle

Comment from patmedium

Excellent

Next please! This is a really compulsive read. Frustrating because I have to wait for each chapter. Your characters are strong and clear and also likeable.
Many thanks.
No criticism.
Pat.

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 Comment Written 08-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2010

Hey Pat, So good to see you. Yes, reading them a little at a time is frustrating, I agree.

Glad you liked this one,

Gayle

reply by patmedium on 08-Jan-2010

Most definately, I liked it! Many thanks. Pat.