A Man's Heart
the many facets of a man's heart4 total reviews
Comment from isabelteeth
Quite lovely. By man, do you mean a male or a general person? It works both ways well, I just wish it were slightly clearer. all the nature metaphor is beautiful.
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
Quite lovely. By man, do you mean a male or a general person? It works both ways well, I just wish it were slightly clearer. all the nature metaphor is beautiful.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Isabel,
Thank you for your review. to answer your question. The focus of the poem is that of a male but I agree everything said can apply to any individual person.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I expect a man's heart is much the same as a woman's heart, we are all vulnerable to having our heart broken even when we think we are strong and can resist falling in love, we all succumb in the end, a fine post, love Dolly x
I expect a man's heart is much the same as a woman's heart, we are all vulnerable to having our heart broken even when we think we are strong and can resist falling in love, we all succumb in the end, a fine post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
Comment from artisart4u
This is a nice poem giving a man credit for being one who is protective, one who guides you from a man's perspective and she love too.
I like how each stanza started with the same words and ellipsis.
Good luck with your poem.
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
This is a nice poem giving a man credit for being one who is protective, one who guides you from a man's perspective and she love too.
I like how each stanza started with the same words and ellipsis.
Good luck with your poem.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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artisart4u,
Thank you for your wonderful review. I truly appreciate am value your comments.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was so creative. My favorite part was your comparison of a man's heart to waves of the sea is perfect. I think it is a unique way to share his enduring nature. I thought this was a beautiful and positive poem. Great job.
I thought this was so creative. My favorite part was your comparison of a man's heart to waves of the sea is perfect. I think it is a unique way to share his enduring nature. I thought this was a beautiful and positive poem. Great job.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024