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A Man's Heart

the many facets of a man's heart

4 total reviews 
Comment from isabelteeth
Good
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Quite lovely. By man, do you mean a male or a general person? It works both ways well, I just wish it were slightly clearer. all the nature metaphor is beautiful.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 04-May-2024
    Isabel,

    Thank you for your review. to answer your question. The focus of the poem is that of a male but I agree everything said can apply to any individual person.

    All the best,

    Eugene
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Excellent
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I expect a man's heart is much the same as a woman's heart, we are all vulnerable to having our heart broken even when we think we are strong and can resist falling in love, we all succumb in the end, a fine post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2024

Comment from artisart4u
Exceptional
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This is a nice poem giving a man credit for being one who is protective, one who guides you from a man's perspective and she love too.
I like how each stanza started with the same words and ellipsis.
Good luck with your poem.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 04-May-2024
    artisart4u,

    Thank you for your wonderful review. I truly appreciate am value your comments.

    All the best,

    Eugene
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Excellent
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I thought this was so creative. My favorite part was your comparison of a man's heart to waves of the sea is perfect. I think it is a unique way to share his enduring nature. I thought this was a beautiful and positive poem. Great job.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024