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Past and Present Happiness

A 5-7-5-7-7 poem

2 total reviews 
Comment from isabelteeth
Good
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I love this! The black dress being new and the red necklace being old is a really cool touch that makes one think. the final line also completes this little story really well and it conveys the perfect emotion especially on a second read.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
    Thank you for your review and kind words.
Comment from patcelaw
Excellent
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This is a very nice five, seven, five, seven, seven. For the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely day and God bless. Patricia .

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
    Thank you for your review and kind words.