From the Sky
look out below!2 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Wow, Mike. What an imagination! I didn't know that there were any 73' Vegas around anymore. Who knew? I guess you have got to get around to see all the many vehicles that grace the streets where you live.
Jesse
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Wow, Mike. What an imagination! I didn't know that there were any 73' Vegas around anymore. Who knew? I guess you have got to get around to see all the many vehicles that grace the streets where you live.
Jesse
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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AA hard as I try I can't forget the fine cars of my youth, Pinto anyone?
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Haha. You have a fine sense of humor!
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As a kid we had a fine Pinto hatchback; I need that sense of humor! Thanks, Jesse
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My family always drove station wagons.
Comment from Brett Juliet
Hello Mr. Legend! : ) First, I like the flow and structure of your poem. And I also like the contrast between the opening image of your sleeping on a cloud and then your exploding on a 73 Vega. So good. However, I must say it was well worth my day to review this and read the phrase, "Goiter of an idea..." F'ing awesome!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Hello Mr. Legend! : ) First, I like the flow and structure of your poem. And I also like the contrast between the opening image of your sleeping on a cloud and then your exploding on a 73 Vega. So good. However, I must say it was well worth my day to review this and read the phrase, "Goiter of an idea..." F'ing awesome!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Brett
