Comment from BermyBye50

Excellent

G'day Wendy,

Congrats on winning the Oh, you are... are you? Contest. Your entry was witty, whimsical and clever. The verses were well rhymed and the self conversation shined through brilliantly. I really enjoyed reading this entry.

All the best,

Eugene

 Comment Written 04-May-2024

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reply by the author on 04-May-2024

Thank you very much Eugene. I appreciate you very thoughtful review very much.
Wendy

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

This takes a criticar look into self and does it with a sense of humor and humility, that is not conderscending. It is also well written and illustrated.
RJ

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024

Thank you so much for this super review. I am glad you enjoyed it.

reply by RJ Heritage on 29-Apr-2024

You are welcome

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the Oh, you are...are you? writing prompt. This is a humorous poem with a cute twist ending. It follows the criteria of the writing prompt. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024

Thank you very much, Marilyn. What a lovely review. I also appreciate your good wishes!

Comment from Idawiesenfeld

Excellent

Amazing poem!! You created a sense of excitement and the picture of this perfect girl, too end with the fact that it is none of those things. Well done !!

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024

Thank you very much for this super review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Exceptional

What an awesome job you did. Great flow and rhyme you managed to incorporate you are quite cleverly in your poem. I Love this. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024

Thank you so much, Joanne, for this amazing review and for the lovely rating of six stars. Also for the good wishes. All greatly appreciated.

Comment from Barry Penfold

Excellent

Good one. I think this will do well in the contest. Nice rhyming and wording. Thanks for sharing and the image is a beauty. Well done. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024

Thank you very much, Barry. A very encouraging and very nice review.

Comment from Brenda Strauser

Excellent

This poem is so funny. I liked the way it ended. The poem is clever. It is written well. Good luck in the contest. The description you uses was very good.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024

Thank you very much, Brenda. A super review.

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Bravo! Well done. I love the rhyming pattern nothing seems forced and they all fit nicely.

The ending line really packs a wallop.

This should place.
D

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024

Thank you Douglas! That is most encouraging!

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought this was so clever! Through witty rhymes and clever wordplay you explores how we see ourselves versus how others might see us. I could relate to your poem and I think that's always a good thing. Very clever and a fun poem to read!

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024

Thanks so much. I am glad you enjoyed it!

Comment from gansach

Excellent

This is a great entry for the "You are . . . " humor poem competition. I suspect most of would like to think we are all these wonderful things, but secretly feel we aren't. I always feel like a fraud, especially if someone compliments something I've done--I feel like I'm getting away with fooling everyone & I deny the compliments. Your poem expresses that feeling perfectly & I can relate. Great job! Best of luck!

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024

Thank you so much. A lovely review! It was fun to write this one, and I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks too for the good wishes.