John & Shorty Foil a Bank Robber
Humorous western script8 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is comical and understandable. I've always heard geese are persnickety things. The drawing fits right in. Good work. Have a good weekend. Karen :-)
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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This is comical and understandable. I've always heard geese are persnickety things. The drawing fits right in. Good work. Have a good weekend. Karen :-)
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Thank you for your super review.
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This reads clearly and flawlessly to me, without errors! Shorty and John are a fun pair, guaranteed to put a smile on anyone's face! And they seem to come up smelling of roses here despite their initial intentions. Your playful theme of goose inspired idioms gives an added layer of humour which I could really see enacted on the stage. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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This reads clearly and flawlessly to me, without errors! Shorty and John are a fun pair, guaranteed to put a smile on anyone's face! And they seem to come up smelling of roses here despite their initial intentions. Your playful theme of goose inspired idioms gives an added layer of humour which I could really see enacted on the stage. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your very enthusiastic review.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This script was a nice change of pace. It sent my imagination in a different direction. The story was silly and humorous. The characters were goofy, but loveable, and your descriptions were creative and delightful. I enjoyed the goose jokes.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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This script was a nice change of pace. It sent my imagination in a different direction. The story was silly and humorous. The characters were goofy, but loveable, and your descriptions were creative and delightful. I enjoyed the goose jokes.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your super review. I appreciate it when there are specific things that are liked.
Comment from lyenochka
Geese were used as guards (hence the nursery rhyme "Goosey Goosey Gander") so your goose story is realistic and funny, too! Enjoyed how Shane and Shorty saved the day with the goosey humor!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Geese were used as guards (hence the nursery rhyme "Goosey Goosey Gander") so your goose story is realistic and funny, too! Enjoyed how Shane and Shorty saved the day with the goosey humor!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thank you for taking time to read and review. I surely do appreciate your comments.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written script and I enjoyed listening to it very much. It flows very well and it's easy to follow. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you a very wonderful weekend and. Patricia .
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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This is a very well written script and I enjoyed listening to it very much. It flows very well and it's easy to follow. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you a very wonderful weekend and. Patricia .
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your super review. I hope you have a nice weekend as well.
Comment from judiverse
This is crazy fun. John and Shorty are great, and the addition of the goose was a real honker. Great scene at the bank with Jeb having a busy day between robbing the bank and then the train. Not too bright, though. Funny bit about Wesson referring to the robbery as a take-out order. Great that the goose foiled the bank robbery. Another one John and Shorty will get credit for, I'm sure. I hope they get to keep the goose. It just might lay them a golden egg. I remember about geese because we had some when I was a child. They were pretty nasty and would stand in the middle of the road, defying any traffic that came along. Great humorous piece. Deserving of a 6 if I had any left. judi
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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This is crazy fun. John and Shorty are great, and the addition of the goose was a real honker. Great scene at the bank with Jeb having a busy day between robbing the bank and then the train. Not too bright, though. Funny bit about Wesson referring to the robbery as a take-out order. Great that the goose foiled the bank robbery. Another one John and Shorty will get credit for, I'm sure. I hope they get to keep the goose. It just might lay them a golden egg. I remember about geese because we had some when I was a child. They were pretty nasty and would stand in the middle of the road, defying any traffic that came along. Great humorous piece. Deserving of a 6 if I had any left. judi
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your great and detailed review. I appreciate the time you took to write it. And thanks for a virtual 6.
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You're welcome. Great skit, and I loved the humor. judi
Comment from royowen
Heh heh, this is hilarious I think they will get the better of Jeb Marsh, whether he holds the weapon or not, this is an excellent script Crystie, with complete direction as to the minute details in instruction, great script, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Heh heh, this is hilarious I think they will get the better of Jeb Marsh, whether he holds the weapon or not, this is an excellent script Crystie, with complete direction as to the minute details in instruction, great script, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your enthusiastic comments. I love to make people laugh.
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Well done
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Come and join me anytime you want, as your writing is a deliciously demented as what I write now and then. Te structure is fine and I think the spacing is a non-worry issue. This appears fine.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Come and join me anytime you want, as your writing is a deliciously demented as what I write now and then. Te structure is fine and I think the spacing is a non-worry issue. This appears fine.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your kind review and super comments. I very much appreciate your feedback.
