2024 Japanese Poetry
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Beautiful descriptions and presentation. Again, thank you for sharing your God given talent with us.
garbed in saffron sun tunic
an anointed with meteor showers (Did you mean '
and anointed'?? I'm not a poet so may be wrong.)
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Beautiful descriptions and presentation. Again, thank you for sharing your God given talent with us.
garbed in saffron sun tunic
an anointed with meteor showers (Did you mean '
and anointed'?? I'm not a poet so may be wrong.)
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you very ., Barbara
gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
an anointed --- did you mean AND anointed?
this was a great poetic description of the greek goddess of love and beauty
nice imagery and smooth flow of words throughout
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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an anointed --- did you mean AND anointed?
this was a great poetic description of the greek goddess of love and beauty
nice imagery and smooth flow of words throughout
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley, I fixed it.
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Comment from lyenochka
Yes, Aphrodite or Venus was quite the quite the beauty and was known to cause quite the Trojan War after she got the golden apple by bribing Paris with the love of Helen of Troy. So many stories about these Greek gods and goddesses.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Yes, Aphrodite or Venus was quite the quite the beauty and was known to cause quite the Trojan War after she got the golden apple by bribing Paris with the love of Helen of Troy. So many stories about these Greek gods and goddesses.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister
love,
MariVal
Comment from kahpot
A wonderful read, your description and descriptive words of this Goddess are excellent, love the alliteration throughout, beautifully written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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A wonderful read, your description and descriptive words of this Goddess are excellent, love the alliteration throughout, beautifully written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Kym. Have a wonderful day.
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Comment from royowen
One can't help admiring the ancient gods and goddesses, they were more sinful and powerful than any man. Clothed with power and might, they still used that power to laud it over a weak and frail human mass that bowed before these less than perfect models. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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One can't help admiring the ancient gods and goddesses, they were more sinful and powerful than any man. Clothed with power and might, they still used that power to laud it over a weak and frail human mass that bowed before these less than perfect models. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Roy. Have a wonderful day.
gypsy hugs
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You too.
Comment from RJ Heritage
Well as you know Aphrodite is Greej and Venus is her Roman equivalant. Beautiful and the epítome of love and desire.
Very pretty imagery and compelling words.
RJ
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Well as you know Aphrodite is Greej and Venus is her Roman equivalant. Beautiful and the epítome of love and desire.
Very pretty imagery and compelling words.
RJ
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you, RJ. Have a wonderful day.
gypsy hugs
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You're welcome
