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Sightings

Snack time.

5 total reviews 
Comment from LoAnn Beery
Excellent
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This is smooth and so easy to read.I love it when there is a complete story that is clearly written. When I was finished reading it, I just smiled.I think my favorite line was about birds chirping ending winter's silence

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
    Thank you for your review.
Comment from zanya
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Here is a classic sight of the Spring season, celebrated here, as the earth reawakens and life bestirs and the cycle of life begins anew - a blessed moment -thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for your kind words.
Comment from Mark Jackson
Excellent
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Thank you for entering my contest Tanka, I was unsure if this one would be popular. Each entry is like a gift to me. I get tired of endless requests for 5-7-5 poetry, so I thought I would ask for just a little bit more. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    I really enjoyed your contest.
Comment from jessizero
Excellent
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Eep! A worm! LOL. Your poem was lovely, and that second line was especially great. Thank you so much for sharing your poem, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
    Once again, I appreciate your review.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Excellent
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This is a good subject for your tongue cup poem very relevant to this season. You use great description words and imagery that people can relate to as they look around outside. This is well written and I enjoyed reading it. The image of a bird eating help present their words.

Best wishes

Alex




 Comment Written 23-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
    I am so glad you liked it, thanks for your review.