"Religiously Yours"
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Feeding the Masses"Religious poetry every Sabbath Sunday
3 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
So much more should be done to help the people living in poverty. So many are capable yet do nothing. The same with countries. Thank you for sharing.
On God We My Trust. (remove the 'My' or did you mean 'May'??)
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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So much more should be done to help the people living in poverty. So many are capable yet do nothing. The same with countries. Thank you for sharing.
On God We My Trust. (remove the 'My' or did you mean 'May'??)
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Thank you for your review. And I already corrected that last statement. And have a wonderful weekend.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought your poem beautifully captured the the struggle against hunger. The repetition of "From Masses to Masses" works so well. For me, your poem conveys the struggle for survival and the resilience of the human spirit.
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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I thought your poem beautifully captured the the struggle against hunger. The repetition of "From Masses to Masses" works so well. For me, your poem conveys the struggle for survival and the resilience of the human spirit.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Thanks again Mich.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from WORDSOFTHEHEART
Dr. Ricky,
I am happy to see you are writing and rising above your challenges and difficulties and depression. I enjoyed reading your post.
You write with a passionate heart and on a subject that is near and dear to my own heart. Stop the starvation in our world. On the line" On God We My Trust"
Did you mean "on God we must trust"? or may trust.
I hope you continue your poetry writing and continue to grow and share your thoughts.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Dr. Ricky,
I am happy to see you are writing and rising above your challenges and difficulties and depression. I enjoyed reading your post.
You write with a passionate heart and on a subject that is near and dear to my own heart. Stop the starvation in our world. On the line" On God We My Trust"
Did you mean "on God we must trust"? or may trust.
I hope you continue your poetry writing and continue to grow and share your thoughts.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Thanks and Do Eye know you?
Doctor Ricky 1024
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