Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Beautifully written and presented, your words enhance the image of serenity, it is so peaceful sitting by the ocean and just listening to the waves, a deserved win, congratulations****kahpot

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024

Thank You

Comment from Mark D. R.

Exceptional

Really a terrific overall presentation. Even like your font choice.

Instead of comma after your middle line, consider a long dash or squiggle.

Each line is perfectly crafted.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024

Thank you, I will have a look.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with the tranquil feel of moonlight on a quiet sea.
If only the world itself were so calm and reassuring.
Nicely done with wonderful art work.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024

Thank you, the artwork was a bit too rough but the best I could find without breaching copyright.

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt. I enjoyed the personification of the waves and the night in this poem. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024

Thank you.