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Hat'll Do (for a coffee date)

Limerick (contest entry)

10 total reviews 
Comment from Sally Law
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Oh, this is adorable and Limerick perfection! I almost didn't click on to this contest because I come away so disappointed. The winner, I declare it! Purrrrr-fect! Sending you my best today as always and my good good wishes in the vote.
Sally Law :))

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
    Hello Sal :) Thank you so very much for your wonderful feedback.I really appreciate it... :)
Comment from Bill Schott
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This limerick, Hat'll Do, has the proper formatting and uses the hat scenario well with some well-chosen substitutes for the necessary cap cover. Nice.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
    Thank you for your kind feedback, Bill :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I enjoyed the fine Limerick metre here and your fun lines made this Limerick stand out against the rest and so you won my vote, I hope you win, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
    Hi Dolly, thank you so much for your wonderful feedback and your vote too :) :) very kind of you and so appreciated...
    Best wishes
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 21-Apr-2024
    You are most welcome x
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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You use of the proper syllable count here flows wonderfully with your word choices!! :) ;) A fun and beautifully-written entry to this fun contest -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you!! :)

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading my limerick :) Best wishes...
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Great! A bi-lingual post here. How could I resist? The image is delightful, the limerick reads fluently and captures the scene perfectly (bar the headwear!). A complete package. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much, Debbie, for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading my limerick :) Best wishes...
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
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Oh what a gorgeous little poem! I love it.
There's not much more to say so I'll just print it again here!

A fashionable feline named Faye
misplaced her bejewelled beret,
so sporting a kepi
she met her beau Pepe
and lapped up her cafe au lait.

I lapped it up too!

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much, Shirley, for your lovely feedback. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading my limerick :) Best wishes...
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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This entry for the Limerick writing prompt is excellent. Lots of great rhyming here and a fun Limerick. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much, Marilyn, for your lovely feedback, generous star award and good luck wishes, I really appreciate your review and I'm glad that you enjoyed reading my limerick :) Best wishes...
Comment from jessizero
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I got a big kick out of your limerick. I had never heard of a kepi before. Thank you for including those things in your author's notes! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much, Jessi, for your lovely feedback. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading my limerick :) Best wishes...
Comment from zanya
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This Limerick is simply a gem in the firmament ! Such poetic skill ( the title) and gallic references to launch these two coffee drinking cats into the feline stratosphere- raises a great big hearty chuckle - how I wish I had 6 remaining !!

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much, zanya, for your lovely feedback. I'm really happy you enjoyed my limerick and it gave you a laugh :) Best wishes...
Comment from Mark Jackson
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That is great, I had not heard the word Kepi before but I have seen pictures of them from the 1st world war. This is great fun and a great entry to the contest insisting on cats. Good Luck.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for your great feedback, I appreciate it :)
    Best wishes...