Reviews from

A Note From The (Ex) Librarian

To Jerry, The Lousy Mouse

5 total reviews 
Comment from Teri7
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is a truly cute and well written Mouse couplet poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. The art work you chose is so cute and you used great rhyming words. Best wishes in the contest! Teri

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
    Wow! Thank you so much, Teri, for your very kind words of review, well wishes for the contest and the excellent rating--super appreciated!!!
reply by Teri7 on 21-Apr-2024
    You are so welcome!!!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

That must be quite the job description: librarian/exterminator!

Very cute couplet, and an equally adorable pic to accompany it. Good luck today in the contest. I hope you SQUEAK out a win. (Like what I did there, Mystery Contestant?...)
xoxo

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
    LOL Much thanks for your cheesy--I meant cheery--comments, mice--I mean nice--review and good luck wish. :-))
reply by Rachelle Allen on 19-Apr-2024
    I guess I deserved that, (ro)den't I?..
Comment from zanya
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

What a superb, entertaining and humorous Couplet for the contest and the tone is effectively understated - and a superb visual to accompany- wish I had a 6 remaining!

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
    Oh, thanks so much for your kind review. Your virtual 6 stars is gleefully accepted. :-))
Comment from Lanel Haywood
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is just the cutest poem. The picture adds to its cuteness. It almost makes me jealous that I don't have a Jerry at my local library. I'd love to see how you'd write about other creatures.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
    Thanks so much for your very kind review and excellent rating--highly appreciated!
Comment from Mark Jackson
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I can only assume this is a library for elephants. It is funny I wish you well in the contest. I have got no idea where everyone is getting their pictures from for this competition.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
    Ha! My pic's from google images. Much thanks for your humorous comment, review and well wishes for the contest.