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How The Eclipse Changed My Life

Take my eclipse, please!

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Comment from Julie Helms
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This is a very humorous take on the rending of the space/time continuum! It brought to mind the movie Freaky Friday I saw as a kid. So your hero got to experience quite a few brains of the members of FS. Ok, that could be a bit scary. I hope you like all the people who read this and inserted their names into blanks...and your head!
Nicely done!
Julie

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    Please forgive the delay. Your name was there, too.
Comment from Sallyo
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That is truly, deeply, madly weird. That's okay. I like weird at times. This sort of story is very FS-centric but all the better for that. FS is a closed community, so why shouldn't we have our own self-referential stories? Just one thing, ...popped up[ a

There's a feral square bracket there.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
    Thank you! I (name deleted due to contest rules) will clear it up!