Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was a great 1-6-1 poem, I think. You got the syllable count right, and I liked your rhymes. I know "mist" wasn't an exact rhyme, but you made it work. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024

Thank you for this lovely review. Mist was a slant rhyme.

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Love in a rainstorm keeps lovers warm, and they don't care about the rain. These types of poems are hard to write, you did an excellent job. I only wish I still had six stars. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024

Thank you so much for this lovely review. Your words mean more than a "six" to me

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

It's doubtless acceptable. A sweet poem, clear and well written on a timeless theme, illustrated well, and meting requirements. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024

Thank you for reviewing

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

Ohhhh, Mystery Poet....I see what you did there with that Author's Note --couldn't RESIST the slant rhyme with MIST and KISS. Tsk, tsk, and shame on your naughty self. (Though it did make me smile.)

I love the words of your contest entry and couldn't agree more: nothing beats a kiss anywhere, even in the cool night mist.

Good luck in the contest!! xo

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024

Funny, you are the ONLY person that picked up on that. Some of these reviewers are so dense. Nonetheless, thank you for a wonderful review. It made me smile, too.

reply by Rachelle Allen on 05-Apr-2024

I think not all reviewers read Author's Notes.

xoxo

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Very sweet! Beautifully illustrated with your 1-6-1 imaginatively capturing that intimate moment, sheltered from the storm. Nicely done! Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024

Thank you for the lovely review 😘

Comment from Mark Jackson

Excellent

I like it, I think it meets the brief with mist is in the centre. This is do hard to write because you are locked into your choice of words that rhyme. Then you have to create a narrative which makes sense. I feel you did this well. Good Luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024

Thank you for the review and support

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Fine rhymes and sentiments here and kissing in the rain at night sounds a good way of keeping warm, a fine post for the contest and I wish you luck, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024

Thank you for the lovely review. Dolly

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Okay, I saw what you did here. You pulled off the trifecta. Three rhymes in an eight syllable piece.


That makes you a Master Poet in my book. Well done. Well done, indeed!
D

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024

Thank you for the lovely review, Douglas. Love "trifecta"

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

Very nice 1-6-1 poem for the writing prompt. I must admit i wouldn't have been able to resist using the word "mist" either. I honestly have no idea how the judges will rule on it but it was definitely worth a shot. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024

Thank you for actually reading my notes and poem

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Slant rhymes are fine with me. I'm not tne poetry police. A sweet love poem in a most difficult form. Beautiful illustrated too.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024

Thank you so much