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5-7-5 (dandelion seeds)

5-7-5 poem

2 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I would change your last line to (smiles) for the sake of grammar, good luck with the contest, those dandelion seeds are tenacious and abundant, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
    Thank you dear Dolly <3
Comment from tfawcus
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There's a suggestion of lightness and joy in this. The alliteration of 'f' works well in that regard. An enjoyable read and a good entry to the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
    Thank you dear Tony <3