Comment from Esther Brown

Excellent

Very nice. I like the picture and the poem. Fun creating I will bet from the idea to the picture to the poem...good for you. I took the practical side today, planting flowers. It has been a beautiful sunny day and warm enough to tempt even the most grumpy people outside. Esther

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024

Hi Esther, It was fun creating! I'm glad you enjoyed and had a beautiful day outside planting flowers. SO glad Spring is here! Thanks for the great review! :o) Helvi

reply by Esther Brown on 20-Mar-2024

Comment from locust

Excellent

Hi there! I really love this poem and the cadence! The shape poem version was a bit difficult to follow, but the poem itself is beautiful! I have a feeling I'll be thinking about it a lot with spring coming soon :)

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024

locust, I'm not sure reviewers realized I used the keyboard to create the poem. I used astericks to outline the flower and used the & for the stem. I then put the words in the petals. All you have to do to read it is, read the left flower from left to right. There are three lines. You then read the flower on the right the same way! Glad you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for the great review! :o) Helvi

Comment from Debi Pick Marquette

Excellent

Hey, I love this. You did the art and the whole thing.
And I love the poem too. I am not sure about the old art work but this is really cool and hoping to catch more of your work.
I should show you some of the things I have done with it with my granddaughter, Kenzie's art. Thanks so much for the wonderful work. Love, Debi

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024

Hi Debi, I'm not sure reviewers realized I used the keyboard to create the poem. I used astericks to outline the flower petalsand used the & for the stem. I then put the words in the petals. Glad you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for the great review! :o) Helvi

Comment from cupa tea

Excellent

What a cool way to put the poem on line. Did you do something special to get the words into the flower?

If this is for a contest good luck! It's a great poem!

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024

Hi cupa tea, I'm not sure reviewers realized I used the keyboard to create the poem. I used astericks to outline the flower and used the & for the stem. I then put the words in the petals. Glad you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for the great review! :o) Helvi

Comment from RodG

Excellent

My sense of smell is not what it used to be, but there is no sweeter fragrance than a flower's perfume.
I like how you used 4-3-4-3 verse and ABCB rhyme in this short poem. Rod

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024

Hi Rod, Hope you enjoyed the image with the poem inside too! Thank you for the great review! :o) Helvi

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

I don't recall ever seeing a shape poem before but I thought this was really creative and cute. The poem itself has lovely descriptions and the i really like the image of the words on the flowers. Very nicely done.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024

Hi Marilyn, In the early days of Fan Story they did Shape poems once in a while. I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thank you so much for reviewing! :o) Helvi

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

These few selective words have created a wonderful aroma, as flowers bring to us a sense of beauty and also an exquisite fragrance, I enjoyed your ambient and delightful post and these scented smells are indeed fleeting and hang in the air so briefly, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024

Hi Dolly, Thanks for your lovely review! Im glad you enjoyed! :o) Nancy