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A Whisper

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Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Author,
you've asked a great question. As we become more advanced in technology, we seem to be losing the basic knowledge that allowed us to get to where we are. Computers have their place, and perhaps even AI can be useful in some circumstances, but if we don't continue to exercise our brains, if we get lazy, soon the God given abilities that we enjoy now might be gone. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Tom

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
    Yes; good point - what will happen to our brains- get rusty? thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Baltimore Born
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This is a very good poem with a solid message. Technology does seem to be everywhere and in everything. The poem reads well. Good picture to compliment the poem. Nice job.

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
    Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Julie Helms
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That is such an excellent question. Technology is changing our brains in ways yet unfathomable. Great idea and great 5-7-5. Original idea for that prompt, My Muse. Thanks for sharing! Julie.

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
    Thanks for reading- yes will our brains shrink?