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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from shelley kaye
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kicking at the waves - jumping and splashing. . .
a great ocean haiku with wonderful imagery and memories of a past happy time...
a smooth flow of words like the wave over the shore...

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much :) have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Anytime a child is present, I happen to love it. Yes, children, especially little boys, I raised 4, and water go together perfectly. Just need to through in a dog. LOl Thank you for making me smile today.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much :) have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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That's why mothers have two ears. One can enjoy the lulling of the waves but the other ear is on high alert, listening for any danger of the little boy playing in the water...

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
    Yes, moms have to remain present and watch their babies. When I go to the park with Atticus I watch closely, I am afraid someone will grab him and put him in a car and leave.

    Thank you, big sister.

    love,

    marival
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Wow. The entire presentation of your poem was beautiful. Not just the poem - but the imagery and how it is presented. I love the phrase "The sound of my son". That invokes emotion I think because it's such a unique way of describing your boy. Very creative and well written.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much :) have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
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You chose the perfect picture to illustrate your calming poem. I could picture the scene. I remember my children playing in the tide pools on the beach. Catching minnows caught between tides. Wonderful poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much :) have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs