Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

My parents used to tell me that bees in the early fall would be so hellbent on collecting as much nectar as possible that they would get drunk. I used to watch them with amazement. Great poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024

hehe ... poor little drunk bees

Thank you very much for the lovely review. May you have a wonderful weekend

gypsy hugs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I am worried about this poor bee. I am sure the sun and nectar was very wonderful. Peonies are one of my favorite flowers, but I've struggled growing them in Texas. I guess it's too hot. In my newest novel, they are Sami's favorite flower. I enjoyed this entire presentation.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024

thank you very much, Barbara.
gypsy

Comment from shelley kaye

Exceptional

LOL! great imagery!
i can totally imagine a bee being drunk after sipping nectar
loved this one!!

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024

Thank you, Shelley, I am happy you like it. A little humor for change.
I appreciate the exceptional six stars review and kind words.

gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That's a cute painting for your humorous poem about the drunk bee. Those bumblebees really do look drunk sometimes and they love to sleep inside the flowers. A fun poem!

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024

thank you, big sister (*=*)

love,
gypsy

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, I like the essence and the imagery of this poem. I could see the whole scene. Of special note:

drunk with sun and nectar
(I could use a little of both--lol.)

Perfect photo choice. A pleasure to read. Xo. M

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024

thank you very much for the wonderful review, may you have a fabulous weekend.

gypsy

Comment from Baltimore Born

Excellent

Very nice poem. Your first line made me laugh. Your poem reads and flows well. Your last line gives the reason why the bee is drunk. Nice picture to go along with the poem. Nice job.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024

thank you very much for the wonderful review, may you have a fabulous weekend.

gypsy

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

Beautiful imagery of bee behavior! It reminds me of a pear tree we used to have that yellow jackets would literally get drunk on the fruit, and then fly around banging into things. Sorry. Your poem was much more delicate than that. Very enjoyable! Julie

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024

thank you very much for the wonderful review, may you have a fabulous weekend.

gypsy