Vital
Searching for meaning in life5 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Excellent writing. It is full of emotion and vibrant imagery. The image supports your words well. Thank you for sharing this. Many writers will relate to this. I enjoyed reviewing it.
Best wishes!
Alex
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Excellent writing. It is full of emotion and vibrant imagery. The image supports your words well. Thank you for sharing this. Many writers will relate to this. I enjoyed reviewing it.
Best wishes!
Alex
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review and the five stars!
Take care,
Nichola
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Vital, seems to find the most important aspects of living to be both difficult and simplistic depending on the amount of importance assigned.
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This poem, Vital, seems to find the most important aspects of living to be both difficult and simplistic depending on the amount of importance assigned.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
Comment from Julie Helms
Great use of metaphors throughout. The longing in the first stanza of the emptied out soul is palpable.
I really liked this line:
Aching for one effervescent light that drowns my heartache, like no other pinprick of a star.
You have a very creative ability in your use and combination of words to strike a mood or feeling.
Thanks for sharing! Julie
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Great use of metaphors throughout. The longing in the first stanza of the emptied out soul is palpable.
I really liked this line:
Aching for one effervescent light that drowns my heartache, like no other pinprick of a star.
You have a very creative ability in your use and combination of words to strike a mood or feeling.
Thanks for sharing! Julie
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Julie,
Thank you for your detailed review. I really appreciate it!
Nichola
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Seeing life as a game here and there is no easy way to play. We want to star in our own movie but our flame often dies and needs constant nourishment, I enjoyed our musings Nichola, a clever post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Seeing life as a game here and there is no easy way to play. We want to star in our own movie but our flame often dies and needs constant nourishment, I enjoyed our musings Nichola, a clever post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Thanks so much, Dolly, for your insightful review. xx Nichola
Comment from mermaids
You have a delicious use of words here. I like how you mention baseball which seems to fit nicely in your words. "With emptied out soul" is another perfect poetic line that impacts your poem. Feelings and emotions come forth from your words. Excellent free verse form.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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You have a delicious use of words here. I like how you mention baseball which seems to fit nicely in your words. "With emptied out soul" is another perfect poetic line that impacts your poem. Feelings and emotions come forth from your words. Excellent free verse form.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your thoughtful review, mermaids, and thanks for the 5 stars. I am tickled pink that you enjoyed my poem.
- Nichola
