Comment from Sarah Sandison

Excellent

I love this poem. It reminds me of reading books to my daughter when she was young and sitting in bed together. Its so important to create those memories. The picture you chose was perfect too :)

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024

Thanks for the kind comments, Sarah.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Joan

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

This is very nicely done, Joan. You have chosen a simple structure and rhythm to mirror the simple joy of reading a bedtime story. 'The best way too end a day...' Lovely.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024

Thanks for the encouraging comments, Tony. They are very appreciated.
Joan

Comment from Father Flaps

Excellent

Hi Joan,
My wife always read Bible stories to our youngest son at bedtime. Then, she'd say prayers with him, and he slept through the night. Whenever I laid down with him and started to read a story, I'd fall asleep in no time! In other words, I was no good at the job. But that's where a firm relationship is made.
It's true that the love of reading is the first step towards writing. When I was a little kid, I knew all the words on each page by heart because my mother, Auntie Viola, and grandmother Bartlett read to me.
Can I offer a couple of suggestions?
"In the soothing tone
of Mother's
Voice is shone" ... (I suggest,
Where the soothing sound
of Mother's voice
is found)

and,
"That both she
And you
Love to read" ... (I suggest,
She planted the seed
that gave me
the love to read)

I hope this helps a bit.
Hugs,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024

Thanks, Kimbob.
I?ll think about your edits.
I used sound for the alliteration.
Joan

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

There is a light feel and flow to your words. Your poem fits the picture perfectly. Your words are soothing and remind the reader of a more gentle time, being read to and surrounded by stuffed toys.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024

Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem. I am glad you found the poem soothing.
Joan

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Lovely poem inspired by the picture. Reading to your friend or parent is a magical thing. So many places to see and people or animals to meet... great entry for the picture this club.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024

Hi MariVal,
Thanks for your continued support. It is much appreciated
Joan

Comment from Yusita

Excellent

I enjoyed this sweet little write. It brings back so many good memories of when I was a little girl and my Mom would read stories to me before bedtime. It's one of my favorite childhood memories! You are so right... the best way to end a day is with that special friend (Mom) and stories!

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Yusita.
Joan

Comment from QC Poet

Excellent

Perfectly describes the Picture of reading unfortunately from days gone by. Now days both parents and children have their own worlds on line. Enjoyed the poetry and matches that photo very well. Thanks for Sharing your Thoughts in Poetic form.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024

Thanks, QC, for the nice review.
I read to my children. I am an avid reader and wanted them to be.
It took my daughter a much longer time to become a reader than my son.
Joan

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-A very good image to write about.
-It appeals to our imagination.
-A very good opening verse,
followed by the mother's soothing voice.
-It is a joy to share a story with her child.
-A very good concluding verse.
-Very well done, Joan.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024

Thanks for such an encouraging and thorough review, Pam,
Joan

reply by Pam (respa) on 25-Jan-2024

You are welcome, Joan.

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a beautifully written poem for the club entry. Very nicely done. Great interpretation of the painting. It's so nice to see so many different interpretations from the same picture.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024

Hi Joanne,
Thanks for the review.
I think this club is my favorite.
Joan

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

What a delightfully comforting and sweet verse, Joan! The picture is adorable and your gentle words flow down the page, soothingly inviting the children to read and dream. A great entry for the club! Debbie

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024

I appreciate your kind and encouraging comments, Debbie.
Joan