Picture Poems
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Comment from artisart4u
Your modern sonnet is nice about water and ice.
A rushing waterfall is so awesome to look at.
I see in the picture people are walking down in there when it is frozen.
You have what they asked for and I wish you good luck with your modern sonnet.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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Your modern sonnet is nice about water and ice.
A rushing waterfall is so awesome to look at.
I see in the picture people are walking down in there when it is frozen.
You have what they asked for and I wish you good luck with your modern sonnet.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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Thank you artisart4u on an eloquent review and effective observations. I really appreciate your review and comments. Also for the award of stars.
Comment from tfawcus
An interesting modern sonnet that describes this phenomenon well. A fine pair of photographs, but the poem doesn't rely on them for its effect.
One slip of the finger to fix:
And as is (it) cascades over walls,
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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An interesting modern sonnet that describes this phenomenon well. A fine pair of photographs, but the poem doesn't rely on them for its effect.
One slip of the finger to fix:
And as is (it) cascades over walls,
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you Tony. How could I miss that. Well I will fix it, so thanks again.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your well rhymed and metered poem and the fine sentiments within. A joy to read.
This line is out of metre:
creating serious undertow.
suggest:
(creating earnest undertow)
love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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I enjoyed your well rhymed and metered poem and the fine sentiments within. A joy to read.
This line is out of metre:
creating serious undertow.
suggest:
(creating earnest undertow)
love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you Dolly. You are technically correct, although i usually pronounce serious like a 2 syllable word (sear-you'd). I suppose I could use elision (ser?ous) , I just don?t like the feel of "earnest". Although the assonance of the two "ea" would be neat.
Comment from papa55mike
Yes, they can flow under the ice and I've seen people climb the ice. If they go through, we'll find them in the spring. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Yes, they can flow under the ice and I've seen people climb the ice. If they go through, we'll find them in the spring. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you Mike. That wouldn?t be too good for those climbers for sure.
Comment from lancellot
This is very interesting. I haven't seen a sonnet in this format before. I like the variation on the classic form, and I found the topic just as appealing. I've never seen a frozen waterfall, but now I want to see one in person.
Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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This is very interesting. I haven't seen a sonnet in this format before. I like the variation on the classic form, and I found the topic just as appealing. I've never seen a frozen waterfall, but now I want to see one in person.
Well done.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you Lancelot. It is an impressive sight.
Comment from QC Poet
Very nicely matched to the photographs choice and I personally like when a poem type is modified as I like to do that myself. Thank you for Sharing your poetic style and Good Luck with future projects
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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Very nicely matched to the photographs choice and I personally like when a poem type is modified as I like to do that myself. Thank you for Sharing your poetic style and Good Luck with future projects
Comment Written 14-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much QC, for your review and support. Sounds like we are kindred spirits.
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely written, and I enjoyed reading it. When I was 11 years old, I would have the opportunity to to go and see the Minnehaha waterfalls. I was truly blessed. Patricia.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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This is very nicely written, and I enjoyed reading it. When I was 11 years old, I would have the opportunity to to go and see the Minnehaha waterfalls. I was truly blessed. Patricia.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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Thank you Patricia, it?s nice to have the falls nearby.
