Picture Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 268 "Fine Filaments"Photograph Inspired Poems
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You are observant in your garden as these weeds have inspired you to write this cute poem with fine rhymes and flow. They look delicate, like a fine lacy necklace for the fence, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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You are observant in your garden as these weeds have inspired you to write this cute poem with fine rhymes and flow. They look delicate, like a fine lacy necklace for the fence, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Thank you Dolly for reading and reviewing my work. I like you necklace description.
Comment from Wendyanne
This is a very lovely, well written piece of rhyming poetry in AABB format in which you have show cased a very much ignored and often unnoticed piece of nature, ie, weeds. Weeds can be very beautiful and here in the UK we are encouraged to grown them!!!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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This is a very lovely, well written piece of rhyming poetry in AABB format in which you have show cased a very much ignored and often unnoticed piece of nature, ie, weeds. Weeds can be very beautiful and here in the UK we are encouraged to grown them!!!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Thank you Wendyanne. I am pleased you captured the theme I had hoped. I?m sure the climate there helps encourage growing weeds. Ours have to wait until after the snow melts in Minnesota.
Comment from damommy
I agree. Some have laughed at me because I notice the weeds. I say that all flowers were weeds until someone cultivated them. What beauty has been missed in not noticing weeds.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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I agree. Some have laughed at me because I notice the weeds. I say that all flowers were weeds until someone cultivated them. What beauty has been missed in not noticing weeds.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Thank you damommy. You make a very fine point about my Fine Filaments.
Comment from Navada
These weeds are lovely when you point them out and are so frequently overlooked or, because they're weeds, actively eradicated. They are certainly both delicate and hardy. Two little spag issues - Fillaments in the title and a capital T for tiny in the opening line. Thanks for the share.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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These weeds are lovely when you point them out and are so frequently overlooked or, because they're weeds, actively eradicated. They are certainly both delicate and hardy. Two little spag issues - Fillaments in the title and a capital T for tiny in the opening line. Thanks for the share.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Thank you Nevada, for the review and comments. I am glad you pointed out the spans. I fixed them.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thanks for sharing the photo and notes.
-A very nice presentation.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A good comparison with
stems and "silk worms satin strings."
-Good transition to verse two
as you describe the "comets in the sky."
-A very good poem that creates a pleasant mood.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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-Thanks for sharing the photo and notes.
-A very nice presentation.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A good comparison with
stems and "silk worms satin strings."
-Good transition to verse two
as you describe the "comets in the sky."
-A very good poem that creates a pleasant mood.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Thank you Pam for a very thorough review and comments. Much appreciated.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Yusita
I so enjoyed this poem! It speaks beautifully of something considered so ordinary and, for many, undesirable and unattractive. Your lovely poem reminds us to appreciate all the little things of God's creation, and encourages us to stop and notice wonder everywhere. Thanks for this!
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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I so enjoyed this poem! It speaks beautifully of something considered so ordinary and, for many, undesirable and unattractive. Your lovely poem reminds us to appreciate all the little things of God's creation, and encourages us to stop and notice wonder everywhere. Thanks for this!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much Yusita. I am please that you captured the lesson I hoped would prevail.
Comment from patcelaw
I enjoyed your smart, short, rhyming poem. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I had never heard of this particular weed before so I've learned something new today. Have a good day and God bless. Patricia.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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I enjoyed your smart, short, rhyming poem. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I had never heard of this particular weed before so I've learned something new today. Have a good day and God bless. Patricia.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much Patricia. I am pleased that you enjoyed my little poem about a weed.
