Picture Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 269 "Birdhouse"Photograph Inspired Poems
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Comment from patcelaw
I enjoyed this poem very much and I've enjoyed your comments in the notes. I do not understand all of it and I probably will never really learn it, but it looks well on the page and it's a joy to listen to. Patricia.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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I enjoyed this poem very much and I've enjoyed your comments in the notes. I do not understand all of it and I probably will never really learn it, but it looks well on the page and it's a joy to listen to. Patricia.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Thank you Patricia. Never too late to learn. Thank you for this review and your comments.
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Because of my severe vision problems, I probably will not learn the new things that involve too much in the way of rules or major or rhyming. I kind of just write from my heart what I?m feeling.
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Yes I know.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Perfect picture. We have the same pole style house.
Cool format. I don't always understand the patterns and meters, but this one is easy to spot and gives your piece a nice flow.
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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Perfect picture. We have the same pole style house.
Cool format. I don't always understand the patterns and meters, but this one is easy to spot and gives your piece a nice flow.
D
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thank you Douglas. I always try to make my work both intresting and informative.
Comment from Navada
Thank you for introducing me to this version of a poetic foot. I like the aesthetic imperfections of the birdhouse and yet it is clearly still in use and serving a valuable purpose - a powerful metaphor, I think! :)
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thank you for introducing me to this version of a poetic foot. I like the aesthetic imperfections of the birdhouse and yet it is clearly still in use and serving a valuable purpose - a powerful metaphor, I think! :)
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thank you Nevada. Very perceptive.
Comment from Yusita
This little write was pleasurable to read. I always think it's a nice bonus when the poet is able to make lines 1 and 3 rhyme in addition to lines 2 and 4, as you have done. Lovely poem.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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This little write was pleasurable to read. I always think it's a nice bonus when the poet is able to make lines 1 and 3 rhyme in addition to lines 2 and 4, as you have done. Lovely poem.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thank you Yusita. I appreciate your incites.
Comment from T.A. Walk
I love the ability some authors have to compose such meaning in such few words. Great job!!
No SPAG critique to offer.
It really does look like a rundown little apartment building :)
Thank you for sharing!!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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I love the ability some authors have to compose such meaning in such few words. Great job!!
No SPAG critique to offer.
It really does look like a rundown little apartment building :)
Thank you for sharing!!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thank you TA. For reading and reviewing. Your perceptive comments are most helpful.
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You are most welcome
Comment from Daylily
I love purple martins and that is what this particular house was built and erected for. They are swooping birds and need the height and wide area to launch themselves.
I enjoyed reading your posting very much!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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I love purple martins and that is what this particular house was built and erected for. They are swooping birds and need the height and wide area to launch themselves.
I enjoyed reading your posting very much!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Hi Daylily. Thank you for reading and reviewing my work. Those are lovely birds to watch either perched or in flight. None home that day, as I saw an owl nearby.
