Freedom's Flight
For those with lofty aspirations9 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
This was a great use of poetry and honoring to The Lord. This was a great use of poetry and honoring to The Lord. There! Now I'm really in the mood for repetition! I'm afraid, though, Creation's strife may not be totally resolved till Christ comes again.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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This was a great use of poetry and honoring to The Lord. This was a great use of poetry and honoring to The Lord. There! Now I'm really in the mood for repetition! I'm afraid, though, Creation's strife may not be totally resolved till Christ comes again.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Yes, I think you're right. Thanks for the repetition! :)
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Thank you for your consistently fine writing!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your poem is wonderful. I like the image of the dove. A dove represents sadness, hope, love, peace and spiritual transformation. Your poem is expressing these characteristics throughout the verses.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Your poem is wonderful. I like the image of the dove. A dove represents sadness, hope, love, peace and spiritual transformation. Your poem is expressing these characteristics throughout the verses.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Thank you! :)
Comment from Sugarray77
Good morning. This is a very good poem and flows beautifully in and out of the repetitive lines. The whole piece is masterfully and cleverly constructed and I really enjoyed reading it. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Good morning. This is a very good poem and flows beautifully in and out of the repetitive lines. The whole piece is masterfully and cleverly constructed and I really enjoyed reading it. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024
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Thank you! :)
Comment from Wendy G
Your poem is very thoughtful, as well as relevant and timely. The complexity of your repetition shows your creative skill. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Your poem is very thoughtful, as well as relevant and timely. The complexity of your repetition shows your creative skill. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much, Wendy! :)
Comment from Douglas Goff
It is an interesting format to repeat several times. Kind of beats the point home.
Great piece filled with hopeful inspiration. Good luck in the repetition contest. Good luck in the repetition contest. (Ha! See what I did there!)
D
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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It is an interesting format to repeat several times. Kind of beats the point home.
Great piece filled with hopeful inspiration. Good luck in the repetition contest. Good luck in the repetition contest. (Ha! See what I did there!)
D
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Ha! I did! Thank you! :)
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I really enjoyed this poem. The dove was a warm touch to the poem. The words used were great. The rhymes flowed well. Beautiful poem. Great job
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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I really enjoyed this poem. The dove was a warm touch to the poem. The words used were great. The rhymes flowed well. Beautiful poem. Great job
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thank you! :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine tribute to freedom here with well chosen words and fine rhymes. I adore the sentiment and the metre, a skilful post for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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A fine tribute to freedom here with well chosen words and fine rhymes. I adore the sentiment and the metre, a skilful post for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thank you! :)
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, I know there's probably no one that doesn't want to soar with and like the birds, particularly the eagle, oh that I had the wings of a dove, cried the psalmist. This is so professionally written, great rhythm, good rhyming, articule, smooth and lovely writing, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Oh yes, I know there's probably no one that doesn't want to soar with and like the birds, particularly the eagle, oh that I had the wings of a dove, cried the psalmist. This is so professionally written, great rhythm, good rhyming, articule, smooth and lovely writing, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much! :)
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Welcome
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love this stanza brings tranquility and harmony and in the same time it reminds us about the peace that we got at the beginning of our lives "To find the key to solve creation's strife
I'd beg our Lord to fan the flames of love
And grant mankind respect for human life
And imitate the peaceful, gentle dove" thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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I love this stanza brings tranquility and harmony and in the same time it reminds us about the peace that we got at the beginning of our lives "To find the key to solve creation's strife
I'd beg our Lord to fan the flames of love
And grant mankind respect for human life
And imitate the peaceful, gentle dove" thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much! :)
