Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

I studied that animal on the rock for sometime. I have come to the conclusion that it must be a dog or a fox.

Great poem. Love caves. There is a unique feeling when you look out at the world from inside. Almost protected. You captured that.

Great job.
D

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024

Hi Douglas,
Thanks for the nice review and all the stars. I appreciate both.
Enjoy the rest of your weekend.
Joan

Comment from Navada

Excellent

I enjoyed your choice of imagery here to match the visual image. There's a sense of calm and trust in your words which is appealing. The only suggestion I have is to consider your use of capitalisation and think about which words need capitals, given the flow of your sentences. Thanks for the share.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024

Thanks for the review and editing help. I will look into it.
Joan

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

A nice spiritual feel to your solace by the sea, Joan. The sounds the sights are all calming the senses in your free verse write. Nice one Joan,
Happy 2024,
Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2024

Thanks, Valda, for the nice review and all the stars. I was hoping some would get that feeling.
Joan

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hey Joan. I thought you had to use a picture since this is a 'Picture This' prompt. Oh well... I especially like the second stanza about the water lapping at the shore and how it clears the mind. Great job!

Melissa

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 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024

Hey Melissa,
I figured out how to add the picture from the club prompt.
Joan

Comment from Reece Gibson

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this poem. I feel it could be longer and go more in to depth about the cave and the creator. I like poetry and enjoy open minded poetry.

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 Comment Written 05-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2024

Hey there,
I have figured out how to add the missing picture. With the picture maybe you won't think it needs to be longer.
Joan