Into Infinity
picture this club-time alone solace by the sea15 total reviews
Comment from Lisasview
Such a wonderful image to write a poem about...time alone, seeking solace by the sea..event
Excellent writing...
Lisa, recovering from a new knee
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Such a wonderful image to write a poem about...time alone, seeking solace by the sea..event
Excellent writing...
Lisa, recovering from a new knee
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thanks for reading and reviewing, Lisa. I appreciate it very much.
Joan
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Hi Joan,
You are so welcome
Lisa
Comment from karenina
What a great reminder that it must be a determined choice to look outward and upward! Caves are great...we just can't allow ourselves to hibernate there forever!
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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What a great reminder that it must be a determined choice to look outward and upward! Caves are great...we just can't allow ourselves to hibernate there forever!
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thanks a lot, Karenina.
You are so right.
Joan
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You are so right! I just agree...
:)
Comment from Daylily
Being alone and enjoying it is a gift benefitting our well-being.
Your posting is a reminder that it is important to stay in touch with our feelings and that happens a lot when we have the chance to spend some private time doing a bit of deep thinking.
Your last thought written here is especially meaningful: Commune with the Creator.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Being alone and enjoying it is a gift benefitting our well-being.
Your posting is a reminder that it is important to stay in touch with our feelings and that happens a lot when we have the chance to spend some private time doing a bit of deep thinking.
Your last thought written here is especially meaningful: Commune with the Creator.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thanks, Lily. I appreciate your nice thoughts about by poem.
Joan
Comment from Gloria ....
This is an interesting piece of art and you have written well in response to what it inspired within you.
The cave's mouth is like a doorway leading into infinity which gives cause to consider the Creator.
Very well done, Joan. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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This is an interesting piece of art and you have written well in response to what it inspired within you.
The cave's mouth is like a doorway leading into infinity which gives cause to consider the Creator.
Very well done, Joan. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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I am glad you liked it, Gloria. Thanks for the positive comments.
Joan
Comment from Kingsrookviii
I like this so much I will offer a possible, but unnecessary change; the last two words in the second stanz, mabe clearing minds ... ? No matter, it's incredible as us. I fell in at once. Bravo!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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I like this so much I will offer a possible, but unnecessary change; the last two words in the second stanz, mabe clearing minds ... ? No matter, it's incredible as us. I fell in at once. Bravo!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Hi Kingsrook,
Thanks for the review. I am honored by the six star rating.
I will check out those last two words in stanza two.
Joan
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good picture to write about and
a good presentation, Joan.
-You have written a good poem for it.
-A good opening verse about the
nature of a "protective cave."
-The sound of water clears your mind,
and that allows you to experience
new thoughts and feelings "to
commune to the Creator."
-Well done; thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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-A good picture to write about and
a good presentation, Joan.
-You have written a good poem for it.
-A good opening verse about the
nature of a "protective cave."
-The sound of water clears your mind,
and that allows you to experience
new thoughts and feelings "to
commune to the Creator."
-Well done; thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thanks for the nice comments on my poem, Pam.
Joan
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You are welcome, Joan.
Comment from mermaids
I can relate to your words. Looking out at the sea brings me close to our Creator. I like the feelings and images that come forth in your words. Your free verse form fits the picture perfectly. There is also a light feel and flow to your words, excellent free verse form.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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I can relate to your words. Looking out at the sea brings me close to our Creator. I like the feelings and images that come forth in your words. Your free verse form fits the picture perfectly. There is also a light feel and flow to your words, excellent free verse form.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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Thanks for the nice comments and all the stars, Elaine,
Joan
Comment from Yusita
I love the mood this piece creates... it evokes a sense of peacefulness while the image helps the reader place himself/herself within each line, experiencing what you are actually describing.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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I love the mood this piece creates... it evokes a sense of peacefulness while the image helps the reader place himself/herself within each line, experiencing what you are actually describing.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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Thanks for such positive comments, Yusita.
Joan
Comment from NanaGaye
Nothing like time alone, as you've said in your words 'lets you see infinity'
Perfect choice of picture. Really tells a story of complete relaxation.
I would have awarded you six stars,but mine are all used at the moment. I'm of now to have my time alone in the garden All the best
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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Nothing like time alone, as you've said in your words 'lets you see infinity'
Perfect choice of picture. Really tells a story of complete relaxation.
I would have awarded you six stars,but mine are all used at the moment. I'm of now to have my time alone in the garden All the best
Comment Written 13-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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Hi Nana, I am honored you liked it enough to think of giving it six stars. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Joan
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Your welcome
Comment from Julie Helms
This poem conveys a sense of calmness and a lilting beauty. I found your line "lets you see infinity" interesting. As if from the cave you are given a telescopic view into the universe. That, along with climbing mountains to commune with God definitely lend itself to a deep spiritual perspective.
Thanks for sharing! Julie
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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This poem conveys a sense of calmness and a lilting beauty. I found your line "lets you see infinity" interesting. As if from the cave you are given a telescopic view into the universe. That, along with climbing mountains to commune with God definitely lend itself to a deep spiritual perspective.
Thanks for sharing! Julie
Comment Written 13-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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Thanks for reviewing and getting my meaning, Julie.
Joan
